I sat and watched a slow sunset
Darkness blinked as fading light danced
Wind drooled like a clarionet
Amethyst tones of gloam nuanced
Silken gloom turquoise stars caressed
In golden roam sweet dreams enchanced
Lunar rhythms poured euphoric
As amber stardust flamed auric.
# ottava rima
I love the way you have used all the sense in this poem, Yassy.
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Thank you dear Robbie.
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Reblogged this on lampmagician and commented:
I feel lightly as the wind ❤🙏❤👍
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You are too kind , Alaedin 🙏🏼🤗 , thank you so much my friend! I so appreciate!!
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I must Thank You for your wonderful and great poems 🙏 you are surely much appreciated ❤❤🙏
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I think appreciation is the highest form of inspiration! So maybe that’s why I write.
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And your writing is a great inspiration for me 😊❤🙏🙏❤
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Happy blogging 🙋🏻
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This is lovely Yassy! ❤️
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Thanks honey
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You are so welcome!
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Beautiful poem.
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Thank you.
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Really nice!
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Thanks.
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There’s a mystical air in your poem that is entrancing!
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Thank you dear one.
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You are very welcome.
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How you manage to give words a picture, an image so strong is beyond me. Your words just emulated the sunset in my mind and like your words, it was beautiful Yassy.🌹🌹
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Thank you , Mr.Poetwilde. I can see golden sparkles in my sunset. Thank you dear Jokersona😘💖
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I see them too Yassy because your sunset is always beautifully bright with the words you cast.😉❤️🌹
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May you both share sunsets together some day.
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Yes indeed Yassy, someday.😊
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Yes, definitely , yes 👍
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😊
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This is absolutely lovely!
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Thank you.
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Love the poem
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Thank you , Rupali b
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Oh, super!!!
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Thanks.
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Yassy, your poetry takes me away
to somewhere most euphoric 😎
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Therein lies the magic
Where you wax metaphoric
You pen poetry prose historic
You , David Redpath
You pave your glorious path
Bravo
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I sit in awe as I read your words. 💞💞💞
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Sparkling Sona , I thank you so much , my dearest buddy 😘🙋🏻
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Still can’t believe how incredible your vocabulary is. Love the piece!!!
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Bowing 🙇🏽
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Beautiful writing in streams of consciousness. Anand Bose from Kerala
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Thank you, Anand.
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I felt this in my heart. The image of one looking at the sunset and taking everything in as the sun goes down and feeling the winds blowing and the beauty of it all is poetry.
🙂
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Thank you my good friend, Charlie Charles 😊
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Bless you so much and you’re very welcome. 🙂
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AAAAAH SO BEAUTIFUL I’ve missed reading your writing :))
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Liar, liar, you don’t miss no one here, if you did , you would be here more often.
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DON’T BE MEAN TO ME :(((( I promise I’ll check your writing much more frequently now, at least once a month. I promise !!!
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It’s not fair , Gustaf! You must make the effort !
Well, see you around 😊💃🏿🙋🏻
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So 🌜
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