A David Ku
wouldn’t either.
Reading a Redpath verse,
Me in happiness immerse
I still , my hopes nurse
You, David in haiku converse
A conversation so diverse
Boredom disperse
Hehe bye D🙋🏻😎
Now here’s a thought
Wouldn’t it be great
For you and David to collaborate
There is no fear this would come to naught
So now that the gauntlet is laid down
Consider this don’t cast a frown
Poets with words at will
Compose yourselves, then the reader thrill.
Now, that is a pretty mighty verse, Chris
For all the world, I could never miss
You compose lines beautiful
Your creativity is plentiful
It’s fun to read you
You give us good stiff to read without much ado.
Thank you , Chris for visiting my blog
Immense joy I get from this dialog.
Thank you Yassy
Now I’m off to regurgitate
See if I can write something sassy
Hopefully its not too late
To set the wheels in motion
Sprinkle some poetic potion.
You will write something sassy
What you write will be classy
My friend, it can never be too late
Don’t let yourself berate
Your poetry is rejuvenation
A wonderful creative word creation!!
You know what sweetie, I been stressed too and writing makes me feel better. I am so happy that you feel better. May you be happy always. I love you too my dear friend. You take good care.
A great ku slam Yassy ❤
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Thank you , Holly 🙏🏼💖💖
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You are welcome 💖💖
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Originally written. I enjoyed this.
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Thank you 😊
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You are welcome.
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🤗🙏🏼
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That is amazing, Lady Yasmin. Word art, art’s words. Surreal and neater than neat ~ George
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Thank you , Lord Zoolon for a comment so upbeat , your appreciation makes this ‘word art’ complete !
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Very clever, ironic and beautiful at the same time!!!! A delightful reading! Thanks for sharing
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Thank you, Lynyo😊
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My pleasure!
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😊
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Keep it up!!!😀
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• I get the point
• A Haiku and you
• never disappoint 😎
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A David Ku
wouldn’t either.
Reading a Redpath verse,
Me in happiness immerse
I still , my hopes nurse
You, David in haiku converse
A conversation so diverse
Boredom disperse
Hehe bye D🙋🏻😎
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When it comes to Haiku
I know not what to do,
but say, “God bless you!”
(and offer a tissue) 😎
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I need no tissue
To weep on, I need a shoulder
As strong as a boulder
Be my sounding board
Little haiku verses we will hoard
😂💃🏿🙋🏻
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In the halls of the Mountain King 🏔️
the verses of your slam shall ring 💎
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Am taking a bow
Am taking a bow
May happiness be long lastin & slow
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and keep you safe & warm
when the wild winds blow 😎
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Can I call you my Bestie?
Cus I never anyone so gutsy, eh !
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Yassy of poetry so tasty,
you can do as you so desire …
for that would well please me 😎
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If my poetry is tasty
Your comment is feisty 🤓
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Then you can call me anything!
Just don’t call me late for dinner
. . . or a Fiesta 😎
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Your comment makes me want to sing
I am so enjoying this poetic fling 😉
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So cleverly done! Really enjoyed this 💜💜💜💜
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Thanks love 🙏🏼
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Wowsa! Brilliant piece, Yassy.
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Thank you , Eugenia 😘
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My pleasure.
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I am lost for adjectives.😊
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Copy that !
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😊😉
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Reblogged this on Commentary, Outrages, Prose.
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Thank you, Lord Kirk.
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Most entirely welcome Lady Yassy.
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Such sweetness I not come across from any gentleman! You are one of a kind , Rich!
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What a charming read – you are so witty -❤️
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Thank you, S 💖
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Loved this Yassy, though Haikus are short, you are never short on brilliant words dear friend.🌹
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Thank you, Sparkling Freeze.
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So welcome 😉😇❄️
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💐💖🤗
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😉❤️🌹🌹
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Love your slams. Always perfect.
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Thank you , Tara.
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Witty, gorgeous, playful my dearest Y. I am smiling like Basho 🙂 You are the best!
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Thank you , Gabriela! 💖💖
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You are so welcome Y! Sending you lots of love.
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🤗🤗. Ciao.
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🤗💝🌸
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Now here’s a thought
Wouldn’t it be great
For you and David to collaborate
There is no fear this would come to naught
So now that the gauntlet is laid down
Consider this don’t cast a frown
Poets with words at will
Compose yourselves, then the reader thrill.
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Now, that is a pretty mighty verse, Chris
For all the world, I could never miss
You compose lines beautiful
Your creativity is plentiful
It’s fun to read you
You give us good stiff to read without much ado.
Thank you , Chris for visiting my blog
Immense joy I get from this dialog.
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Thank you Yassy
Now I’m off to regurgitate
See if I can write something sassy
Hopefully its not too late
To set the wheels in motion
Sprinkle some poetic potion.
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You will write something sassy
What you write will be classy
My friend, it can never be too late
Don’t let yourself berate
Your poetry is rejuvenation
A wonderful creative word creation!!
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When the High Priestess of poetry sings
Beauty to the alphabet she brings
I must away now time for rest
Dream of tomorrows poetry fest.
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Hope you are well rested
For the poetry fest that you are interested
You are on a roll , Chris
Best to you in your quest.
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feel something has gone beyond what you have done so far. this is something new!
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Thank you my friend. So happy you think so.
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i’m happy, too!
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😊🙋🏻
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really made me feel so much better! I’ve been so stressed and this was really exactly what I needed to read right now! Love you Yassy!
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You know what sweetie, I been stressed too and writing makes me feel better. I am so happy that you feel better. May you be happy always. I love you too my dear friend. You take good care.
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I hope you will be happy always as well, and you take care too!
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🤗🤗🤗
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awesome post, yassy!
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Thank you 😊, Joey.
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A very stylistic Haiku that feels different from any Haiku out there.
Yassy, you set the bar really high on this incredible work. 🙂
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Thank you , Charlie. Heading over to despondency !
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WOW.most lovely Slam.my dear yassy!!xxxxx✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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💕💕💕💕💕
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💖💕💖
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