dark rain clouds now fill the blue sky hiding the sullen sun behind even as he comes out to try to melt the ice buttress outlined. the sky is just waiting to burst, even as thunder rolls, lightening strikes quenching thirst as nature is nursed drenching well enough to suffice. faucets have opened in the sky misting the air with crystal drops shimmering like icicle pops splattering, moistening soil still dry. dribbling into gurgling brooklets splashing merrily on rocks and ponds tracing small, tiny rivulets bridges, archways betwixt dewy fronds. i feel the soothing pureness pour over my skin, into my soul rejuvenating to restore freshness of spirit as a whole.
beautiful.
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Thank you, M.J😊
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Lovely and so refreshing to the soul, Yassy… Thank you for this uplifting poem!
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Thank you , thank you 😊🙂
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You are so very welcome!
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😊
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Very captivating 😊
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Ooooh! Thank you. 😊🙂🤗
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Oh how I love your poetry. It’s always so very perfect. This, this is just simply magical.
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Thank you , sweet, kind, wise Tara😊🌺 what an uplifting comment! Can’t stop smiling.
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That makes me happy, knowing you’re smiling.
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A beautiful heart beating , that’s you Tara dear friend. Take care.
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Thank you ☺️ You are always so nice to me.
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I think it’s easy to be nice to a person like you. You are good , my instinct tells me so and also my interaction with you. You are one hell of a great gal. I think i just met a soul sister, a kindred spirit.
I remember the movie Ice Princess. Somehow I associate that with you , maybe cus you live in Alaska. Lol hahahahaha 😊🙂😀
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I’m no princess (although I AM blushing) but I do love the winter (and by association the snow and ice 💕).
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A fire place cracklings logs warm hearth and a book.
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Yes, yes, yes, and yes!!! Most assuredly!
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Yay 😊🤗
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Absolutely beautiful. A reawakening. And the imagery is amazing. I loved it. 🙂
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Thank you, Jay😊🙂 thank you so much. Am happy to hear that.
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You’re most welcome. 😊💞
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Truly a reawakening and osrt of a rebirth…
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Thank you, B.
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So definitely my pleasure, dearest 🙂
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🙂🤗🙏🏼
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Wauw I love this! Very strong
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Thank you 😊
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So very beautiful.
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Thank you , Nico.
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This was amazingly refreshing and beautiful. Only you can make rain more gorgeous than it already is Yassy. That is what I’m reminded of, each line, each verse and each saturating sentence left readers satisfied with a lovely sensation from your work.🌹
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Sending soothing showers to the golden boy and the golden girl.
Thank you RoyWilde! Your commands always s fill me up with a sense of achievement .
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Your warmth and sunlight is a bonus my friend, you’re to good to us🌹🌹
It’s my pleasure, your words are amazing Yassy, the demand attention and when they are read, they pull you in not only verbally but visually too. You are awesome🌹🌹
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Thank you again , Jo Wo. I am grateful.
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You are phenomenal. You are always welcome.😁
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😊🙏🏼
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😊🌹
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Very nice! Refreshing!
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Thank you , K. 😊🙂
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Another triumph, love the imagery.
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Thanks , John.
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during the drenching downpour. see the dragon fly. it hung out with me for a few minutes. i have many pictures of it hovering a couple feet away. maybe it was wondering, who is this nut out in the pouring rain.
the sky looked like it may open up to the north for sunset, so i could not leave. a memorable time either way. not easy keeping the camera dry.
beautiful poem describing the heavy rain. did the dragonfly tell?
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Dragonfly is a beautiful creature. It must be charmed with someone like you as enchanting as nature.
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here is a picture of it with the flash. it did not even scurry off after the flash pictures. you cannot see the patterns on the water with the flash though. beautiful creature for sure. they buzz by me all the time but this one stayed right with me in the rain for some reason.
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This is beautiful. I think nature has an affinity with you. They are not scared of you, that says a lot. You are a child of mommy nature.
He is a pretty fella. I say hi 😊 oh! You are so lucky. Eby, thank you girl. You sharing this means so so so much to me.
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check this dude out. i ran into him just a little while after the dragonfly adventure. he was quite a ways out in the water when i noticed him. he kept swimming towards me on the water. i had a hard time backing away quick enough in the mud. i did not want him getting in my boots.
he followed me to the water edge and then rested on the mud. i guess he was trying to find some land. never saw one like that before. i have no idea what it is but it was very big. if you don’t want that picture in your comments you can delete the comment. i won’t mind. he gives me the chills. but such pretty green eyes. almost lovable.
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Wow. That is one massive crab. Stupendous shot. Oh! My! Only you can do this, Eby. This is awesome.
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“sky is just waiting to burst,” lightening, rain, rejuvenating your wonderful soul! What a magnificent poem! May you be forever touch by “soothing pureness” and all the beauty in this world!
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You wish me well, thank you for that , G. I worked hard on this. Lol.
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thank you for your poem. it is very hopeful. i appreciate that. it did feel like a cleansing, and i needed it.
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Thank you for your pics. It’s very thoughtful of you.
I am so happy you liked the poem.
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ooo i can feel the rain just by reading this 😊 beautiful!
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Thank you 😊🙂
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Nicely expressed!
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Thank you 😊
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You’re welcome
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👌
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Thankx , Noor!
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Love the image with the faucets opening in the sky. It is beautiful and original. The last three stanzas have a lovely flow and rhyming. Great poem!
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Thank you , my dear. Thank you for such a beautiful comment 😊
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You are kindly welcome.
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😊🤗🌺
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This is a beautiful and accurate depiction of a rain storm, Yassy.
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Thank you 😊
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Beautiful and so descriptive. Wonderful wordplay
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Thankx
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Beautiful poem.
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Thank you.
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Thank you for liking my poem. You write beautifully.
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You welcome , and thank you for reading and appreciating.
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Oh, love this! Alas, the rain is now gone for another year!
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Rains have become a dream now. It’s hot and humid already.
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Yeah man, and Oct has still to start!
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It’s going to be a hot winter.
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BTW, I’ve written a steamy, garma garam one 🙂
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Yeah. Nice and hot. Loved it.
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Tx
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This is so beautiful and fresh 💙
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Thank
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Thank you
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My favorite line by you:
faucets have opened in the sky
misting the air with crystal drops
Perfect description of such beautiful surrealism of poetry. I love this.
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Thank you ,Charlie☺
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You are welcome, Yassy. 🙂
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It is a beautiful line!
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Thank you , Maranda!!
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Beautiful
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Thank you
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Love it!
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Thank you.
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The imagery is breathtaking. The faucet! I love that. Beautifully penned.
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Thank you.
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God knows rejuvenation and restoration of spirit are so necessary
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Yeah, I so agree.
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