That’s not for you to decide. Sometimes we think that we have done a great job but nobody understands it and sometimes we just underestimates and boom. So you never know.
I disagree about “I didn’t do a good job”. This one delighted me. When I read it, I chuckled in complete agreement. I’ve felt this way many, many times.
Nice! It started with a chaos and before I could think of other things, it left me leaving an emotion behind, a poem. Lovely! Haikus are indeed intriguing.
HEHE,,, When I was introduced to her, I was like she is very demanding with the syntax and all.. but then, I just couldn’t resist making her a part of life. 😛 Do read this one, you will find it interesting, I hope. 🙂 https://wordpress.com/post/ataraxissoul.wordpress.com/307
Love the beauty and the concision of this. With just a few words you have expressed so much and so beautifully. This is the real process of crafting a poem.
Writing poetry is interesting, Yassy. Sometimes the words just flow, almost tumbling after one another, and other times you have to work quite hard at a particular poem to get it right.
Thanks but I think you can still do it. I have many friends here on the blog who are OCD ish , they put together words , I think you may be more creative than you give yourself credit.
yaskhan 
Beautiful
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Thank you 😊
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i like the sound of it. Good one.
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I guess my thoughts were clamouring to be heard lol geez I didn’t do a good job, though
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That’s not for you to decide. Sometimes we think that we have done a great job but nobody understands it and sometimes we just underestimates and boom. So you never know.
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Indeed. Thank you so much , Sunil. I so value your thoughts on this.
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I disagree about “I didn’t do a good job”. This one delighted me. When I read it, I chuckled in complete agreement. I’ve felt this way many, many times.
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lol. Thank you for understanding. I am so happy.
Have a fabulous weekend.
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Same to you, Yassy!
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😊
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Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #8: Yassy’s latest haiku!
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Oh! Thanks, Frank. What an honor !
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My pleasure, Yassy! 🙂
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😊🙂
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Lovely
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Thank you.
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Excellent.
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Thank you 😊
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i knw that feeling, many of my haikus die mid sentence 🙂 well captured. kindest regards bg 🙂😎🙂
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Thank you, bg😊 have a super weekend 😎.
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That’s where the magic comes from. Such beautiful thoughts Yassy.
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Thanks sweetie pie. Rays are golden so is Sona. Two golds make a platinum.
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Thank you so much Yassy and like I said, you are the Sun, the center of it all.❤️❤️
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Nice. I like the way it tapers down to two little words at the end. Feels like a little soft landing.
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Thank you , Simon.
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Haha, I have posted more than a few Haiku about not being able to wrote anything. Proof inspiration is everywhere, even when it’s nowhere lol
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lol. It’s frustrating sometimes but that’s how it is , so let’s write 😊 and haiku is tough.
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Hey! i just nominated you for the 3 day quote challenge! click on the link for instructions!
https://nefelibatasmind.wordpress.com/2018/08/05/3-day-quote-challenge-day-2/
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How can you write such deep thoughts in few words. ❤️❤️forever a fan
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You know , it’s difficult , I had almost given up , when these words fell into place. It’s just the way I wrote it .
Thank you for your appreciation.
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It came out so beautifully.
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Oh Thankx.
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😊🌸
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my many days…
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Every writers’😊
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True
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That’s what keeps us going.
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Your thoughts are duly noted! Thanks for sharing – peace and blessings! 🙂
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Thank you. Peace.
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Very good haiku…writing is like that sometimes.
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Yeah. Thanks.
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You’re welcome.
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Haha I love this, so relatable. I love how you expressed it. All that angst then a little poem is born. 💕
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Thanks 😎
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🥂😊
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🍸🍹🍷
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Excellent!
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Thank you.
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Nice! It started with a chaos and before I could think of other things, it left me leaving an emotion behind, a poem. Lovely! Haikus are indeed intriguing.
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Thanks. For me , haikus are tough so I try really hard .
Indeed , haikus are intriguing.
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HEHE,,, When I was introduced to her, I was like she is very demanding with the syntax and all.. but then, I just couldn’t resist making her a part of life. 😛 Do read this one, you will find it interesting, I hope. 🙂 https://wordpress.com/post/ataraxissoul.wordpress.com/307
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That is funny. The link opens to my blog. For a new post.
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Hehe, my bad….https://ataraxissoul.wordpress.com/2016/03/11/haiku/
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Thank you for sharing
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You are welcome..:) It’s funny that while writing every word, I’m counting the syllables. 😛 Effect Of Haikus 😀
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Yeah 😊 actually poetry becomes a habit.
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Love the beauty and the concision of this. With just a few words you have expressed so much and so beautifully. This is the real process of crafting a poem.
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Thank you. It was worth the effort. Didn’t come easy lol. Thank you so much.
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You are welcome.
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Ahhh, the torment and joy of “birthing” a poem!! Bellissimo, Yassy, Bellissimo!
xoxoxo
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Thank you 😊🙏🏼
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thank you.
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Oh…the angst of the poet, in labour….and finally the joy on its birthday. Brilliant Yasmin ❤️
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Thank you , Radha 💖
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Yes the birthing process of a beautiful poem.
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Yes, thank you , Megha.
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This one is spot on! 🙂
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Thank you😊🙂
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Sometimes it goes like this 🙂
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Yup 😊
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Writing poetry is interesting, Yassy. Sometimes the words just flow, almost tumbling after one another, and other times you have to work quite hard at a particular poem to get it right.
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You are right , Robbie. So right about that. 😊
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Love this! 🙂
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Thank you.
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Thank you–Haiku brings cool air
Into morning red sunlight
I sit silently
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Awesome. 😊
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Reblogged this on Chuck's Creativity and commented:
Thank you NOW dear one
Autumn comes Early September
My gold leaves come for you
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Welcome , dear poet
autumn may come
but I love every season for its poetry
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Great haiku. I like how you play loose with the rules of the form, I am so OCD it is hard for me to do that lol.
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Thanks but I think you can still do it. I have many friends here on the blog who are OCD ish , they put together words , I think you may be more creative than you give yourself credit.
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Beautiful words so well written. Anand Bose from Kerala
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Thank you
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First class. Describes the process and the moment so well.
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Yeah. Thank you.
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excellent
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The message here is perfect and beautiful. I feel this one.
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Thank you 😊
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