when the heart bleeds blue like a sapphire glow that died light years ago, its transcience staining breath left to languish as memory. when hearts bleed blue in interludes of time, space enduring the ache of dreams that come unbidden cruising a slumber's cadence flaming the yearning awakening the subconscious rousing devotion an instinctive remembrance like starshine draping night's curve becoming the eloquence elixir on breaths that weave words that were left unsaid.
Beautiful images…
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Thank you so much , Maria.
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You are an absolutely excellent poet yassy, i live your work. It is so refreshing.
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That you ๐ thank you. That is so sweet of you. I feel blessed.
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You are also very very gufted yassy. Never stop writing!
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Thank you for the inspiration and the motivation . You truly are a wonderful human being.
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Such artistry – a piece that should be heard as well as read…
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Thanks, Eric.
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That’s deep. The best thing I’ve read for a while, Lady Yasmin. Clever and something intangible, special, out of reach.
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Thank you , Lord Zoolon.
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What I like most in this is its musicality!! ๐
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Thanks , Newrana.
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Things are only left unsaid because you leave people speechless with your poetry Yassy, and that last verse explained it all. No one can bring words to life like you. A beautiful painting in the form of words once again.๐น๐น
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Aw! Thanks !!
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You are so welcome๐น๐นโค๏ธ
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Oui , Monsieur , merci. Bon jour๐
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Merci petiteโ๐น๐น
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Je t’en prie๐
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Vous etes merveilleux ๐น๐น
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tu l’es aussi ๐บ!
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Hahaha, you got me thereโค๏ธ๐น๐น
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Mama Mia ๐
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Wii ๐
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What is that? Not WillSmith , I suppose.
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Hahahaha!! We We is French.
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Geez ! Whatever does it mean ?
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It means good๐
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Absolutely beautiful.
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Thank you , Tara.
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Love this! especially this line: like starshine draping night’s curve
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Ooh! Thank you ๐, Eric.
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Ohhhh I like it!
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Thank you , Christy๐
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This line brightens like gold: “starshine draping night’s curve”
wow! the surrealism of each line and this one does awaken that dream construct
of worlds that we enjoy tapping into and how our consciousness creates these worlds.
Love this poem so much. ๐
I am back! Yassy.
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Missed you , Charlie. How have you been. I am sure you have something for us.
Will check on you.
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I’ve been okay now. I resigned from a job I was working at for a month and 2 weeks. Toxic environment, 3 men picked on my since day 1. I felt angry and depressed. Healthy comes first. I’ll find something better.
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How have you been? Missed you too my friend.
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I am fine, thank you.
I think something better will come up.
I am sorry about what these guys did, were they jealous , insecure ,somehow. Well, it’s their loss.
It’s not worth the stress, Charlie. You did right !!
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Very nice…dyslexicsugar (drb2)
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Thank you.
Is that a new post from you ?
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“words
that were left unsaid.”
It is what causes, to a greater extent, the suffering of the human being. I liked it very much
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You are right about that. Thank you very much for your insightful comment.
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To you, yassy, always
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Yes ,I drop tears of literature periodically articulated poetically
DRBII 2018 cnnchaosnewsnetwork
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That is great. You come up with some amazing stuff.
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I’m humbled by greatness
I love classic poets and poetry
Despite not being “classic”
I’m abstract/sublime/nuanced
…A dastardly lot of poets made me that way
Any clues..?
Thank you all for inspiration of my abomination and poetic intimations
Ablated Frustrated and dyslexic infected
Thank you for your graciousness and connection
DRBII2018
cnn chaosnewsnetwork
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I think you have this very intellectual creativity ! And it shows in your posts !
Why, did anyone hurt your aesthetic process? I am sorry if people do that negative thing to others , especially poets or writers , whatever it is don’t let it get to you.
You are doing awesome. Bravo. Take care and have a nice weekend.
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This is so unique and descriptive, Yassy. Wonderful.
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thank you, Robbie ๐
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YAY LOVE THIS HEHEHEHE
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Hahaha ha yippeee you showed up !! Thankx.
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BEEN AWAY back now. Have to read all the stuff I missed. Any special pieces???
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Good to see you, Count! You keep playing peek a boo here. Hahahahaha. Have you posted. Never mind, I will swing by ๐
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Posted today that’s why I checked haha. I do right, I should be regular. Drop links to nice pieces you’ve wrtten on my blog thanks
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You should be regular , Count. If you can’t , let’s have Gumbly lol
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You can have gumbly, look for a cloud near you
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The sky is laden with clouds. They all look the same. Grey and dreary.
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That is true. On other days they’re wispy
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Yeah.
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Such a brilliant piece of poetry.
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Thankx , S.
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I saw you liking this post on;
https://poetryfromtheinkwell.wordpress.com/2018/07/19/reader-writer-beware
Have you actually read this post about this hideous and a coward anonymous blogger called “poetryfromtheinkwell” before beliving in his/her crocodile tears a.k.a crying wolf?
https://aatayyab.wordpress.com/2018/05/25/troglodytes-and-other-creatures-that-live-in-caves-no-offense-to-bats/
Amir
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Hope all is well now.
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Poetry of ethereal quality, Yasmin.
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Oh! Thank you , Redpath ! Are you sioux ?
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No, Scottish. But we’ve been
known to go on the warpath.
Just ask the English.
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Scotland is beautiful country. So are you a soldier lol??? ๐ณ
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All clansmen are ever vigilant
and prepared to defend Old
Caledonia from foreign invaders.
Such as the Romans, Vikings,
and those lowland English.
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Fascinating !!
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Love the imagery evoked with this one – an awesome talent you have. I especially liked the last 3 lines:
becoming the eloquence
elixir on breaths that weave words
that were left unsaid.
Thanks for sharing – peace and blessings! ๐
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Thank you so much Tigre๐
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Wow!
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