Lol love your humor!! yippee !!!yes the screen winks. That is so cool. Your comments give a new dimension to my verse here. I think it’s inspiring to read 😊 I feel lucky you put out your thoughts here.
give gleeful great grins/ thine taut treatises toll tomes/ which winks work wonders (this’un playfull yet more than kiddie-pool deep. You will make me miss my ‘bandoned television and sad sick flip-top screen if you keep this up, Cosmic Carroller!
yaskhan 
Ah, this is clever, lovely, cute!
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Ooh! Thanks , Ish!!!😊
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I like the poem, but I think that screens are poor substitutes for eyes.
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Thanks , Harry ! Yeah , your right , but for now I have to rely on my screen to look at all of you hahahahaha lol
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True…and looking back at you.
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Yup! Pleased to see you , Harry 😊
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I love that poem, Yas. Another fave.
The screen “winks” (haha).
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Lol love your humor!! yippee !!!yes the screen winks. That is so cool. Your comments give a new dimension to my verse here. I think it’s inspiring to read 😊 I feel lucky you put out your thoughts here.
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I feel brave doing so.
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😊🤗
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give gleeful great grins/ thine taut treatises toll tomes/ which winks work wonders (this’un playfull yet more than kiddie-pool deep. You will make me miss my ‘bandoned television and sad sick flip-top screen if you keep this up, Cosmic Carroller!
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Am grinning from ear to ear at your comment , Richie! I ditched Netflix to write but but but everytime WP is priority.
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Thanks buddy.
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you said so much with so little 💕
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Yeah. Thanks.
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I see you :):):)
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Good to see you too , Maggi lovely.
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This was awesome Yassy!! When that happens, the heart skips❤️. You are a heart thumper Yassy!
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Thanks , Jo🤡
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No problem Yassy!!😁🌹
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Well penned Yassy. It’s amazing how a lot can happen in just a blink of an eye.
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Thank you , Jay! You are right. It truly is amazing !!!
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Ah, yes. It has happened many times. Perhaps on reading this poem 🙂
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Oh yeah 😊🙂
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i love this one!
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😊🤗💖
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A very nice haiku, Yassy.
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Thank you.
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Senryu is really hard to write
and create a meaningful image in so words
but you have done that here
“our eyes make conversation”
“the screen blinks”
These are amazingly vivid images with amazingly few words Jasmine. 🙂
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