Draining silver of the clouds To spin on a flaxen breeze, Raindrops catch the golden light- Teardrops of the sun Singing in the summer rain Fallen blooms paint the sidewalk A wind chatters to the birds- Nectarine murmurs Sky misses a heartbeat, as A rainbow slips a rendezvous Into sapphire whispers- An airbrushed prism Suffusing emerald trees Breathing boundless horizons Where the sky paints its own dreams- Auroral crescent. #Dodoitsu
Extreme beauty of wirds again. Just lovely
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Thank you. 🌺
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Best that I read today.
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Thank you , Devika, that is damn sweet of you.
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My dear Y, this is gorgeous!!!!
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Thank you my dear G. I feel burned out , I forced myself to write , I don’t know why. I am sorry I haven’t been around much. Please bear with me.
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My dear Y, know that I am here for you anytime! Take it easy, my marvelous poetess.
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Oh ! Thank you. Thank you so much. You are kindness.
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You too, my dear Y! You too! Do not forget that.
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😘💖
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That is so, so good Lady Yasmin
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Thank you Lord Zoolon.
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Poetry that brings the brightest of rainbows out, your words are vibrantly amazing Yassy. Silver lining rain, you can dance in your words all day.🌹
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I will be dancing in your comments all day , my good friend Jo 😊!
Thank you for saying the nicest and sweetest things. Friends like you make the world go around.
Take care , my brainy buddy.
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You are so very welcome my friend, words like yours make the world go round.🌹🌹
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🙂💐
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😊
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You are a great musician!! 🙂
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Oh! Thanks. We make music with poetry but I can’t write music.
Thank you for your thoughts.
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🙂 🙂
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🙂
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Good stuff, Yassy!
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Thank you , M!
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What can I say that hasn’t been said before :):);) Reading the comments here, which I rarely do, you are so loved by so many, least of all me.
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Thank you , dear one. I haven’t been around much. But it’s awesome to hear from you.
I must visit you to see what you been up to.
Love everybody here, Maggi. And you my dearest sister , are very close to my heart. It’s like I am always wondering how you are. Its become a natural instinct now.
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No thanks needed, thats what we do for people we love, we love them :):):) I feel the same way. I think about you all the time. When I don’t see you, I say extra prayers that you are ok, and blessed, and I always know that you are with me :):) woven together like rays of light, or drops of water :):)
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Margaret is light and a blessing. You come like an angel ! Something divine about you , my dear. Stay blessed.
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Beautiful! Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you , Casandra😊🙂
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Words just flew right at me. Well written❤️
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Thank you.
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Beautiful words and poetry yassy. I love the thought of rain being teardrops of the sun. It has both a happy and melancholy feel to it.
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Thank you , Davy. My brain seems to have given up on me, somehow.
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Keep going yassy. There will always be poetry in you.
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Thank you , Davy.
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Beautifully composed metaphors on nature as words bring out the best in thoughts and rhyme!
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Thank you 😊🙂
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What beautifully colorful images… loved this!
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Thank you , Leigh!!😊🙂
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You’re welcome!
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😊🤗
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Oh my, I adore the vibrant and colorful imagery in this! Just beautiful ♥
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Thank you , Emme!
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Loved the last two lines: Where the sky paints its own dreams-
Auroral crescent.
Just beautiful – as always! Peace and blessings! 🙂
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Thank you so much , my friend. Peace hugs.
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Most welcome 🤗 Peace and blessings to you ✌️🙏
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Peace , blessings and warm hugs 😊
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Quatro Dodoitsu; why stop at just one? I often feel [write] this way.
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Yeah 😊🙂 thank you.
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Such beautiful descriptions, Yassy.
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Thank you 😊
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Love the title, beautiful poetry!
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Thanks, Braed!
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Welcome Yassy!
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Wow. You really know how to write poetry.
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Thank you, Shane!😊🙂
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Yasmin! How are you dear friend?
This is another sublime piece!
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I am fine, thank you so much for asking. You are too kind, Venessa.
Thank you so much for reading and your beautifully expressed appreciation of my work.
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It is always a pleasure!! 💕
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Ethereal. ❤❤
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Thankx , Carter 💖
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You immerse me in the nature of sense.
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😊🙂🤗
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Your’s are always so descriptive, I get lost if I close my eyes! And so when I read them, I’m left wide eyed at the sheer beauty! 🤩
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Thank you , Kunal. Yesterday I remembered and missed you and here you are today. Hope you had an awesome holiday !
Finally , the weather is cool , the rains have come. How are you coping ??
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Am good, thanks. Just returned from a holiday. And glad to be back on WP
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Happy to see you here😊😊😊😊🙂
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It’s been a while Jasmine.
I love coming back to your poetry to be treated to a new “nuance” of color.
And you sure don’t disappoint with this piece.
“Where the sky paints its own dreams” is a great line.
I hope you have been well.
Forrest 🙂
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Such picturesque descriptions! I am amazed 🙂
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Thank you , Neha.
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You’re welcome 🙂
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💖😊
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Reblogged this on Ned Hamson's Second Line View of the News.
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Thank you for the reblog
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