A bird takes me flying on her fragile wings When, up on high, she decides to sing. Clouds pour on us making me cry As we taxi a cumbersome sky She doubles her bling as parachute sling. She loves to rap, does a hip hop Freaking out, I tell her to stop Blinded by water, we bang into a plane Death would give us posthumous fame. With a shooting star, to earth we flop.
Omg – imagination at its best. Just beautiful
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Imagination going berserk , like it always does.
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Haha but came out really nice
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Oh! Thanks, Shantanu.
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My pleasure
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This is delight.
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Thanks so much. I was just letting my hair down lol😜🤓
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Delightful!
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Thank you , Michael. Thank you 🙂
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I am always at peace reading your splendid words.
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Thank you my dear
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Delightfully creative and fun poem!
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Thank you.
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My pleasure!
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That part where you express your thought with animates is deadly. Share more
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😊🙂
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You take me flying on your verses! Beautiful!
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Oy! Thanks , G!!
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You are most welcome, my dearest Y!
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I will head to your page in a while and see you are up to. Yay yipeee
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Yay! Thank you!
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Welcome my dear.
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Touching and creative from my view Yassy, while reading this I couldn’t help but think of the late Aaliyah, a hip hop singer who made beautiful music and was awarded even after death. This was simply beautiful, I read this over and over, your haywire was simply a safe haven for the minds. Creative beauty Yassy.
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I am going to check out Aaliya .
Thank you !
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No….thank you for such a beautiful poem.
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Thank you for your beautiful comment.
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🌹🌹. Your beautiful writing deserves such accolades.
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🌺💐 , hope you have a fabulous gorgeous weekend.
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Thank you, and you have a wonderful weekend too lovely. 🌹🌹
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Love it!
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Thanks.
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That was cool.
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Thankx.
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You’re welcome, Yas. 🙂
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I love it! Makes you wonder about flying with the birds!!
Dwight
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Thank you , Dwight.
I see them flying and I wonder how it feels up there, so much power to be able to do that against gravity.
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It really is amazing. I love to fly… taking off is my favorite. Getting tighter and tighter as I get bigger and bigger! LOL
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Hahahahaha 😊
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Very clever, Yassy, and aptly titled. I hate to fly especially take offs and landings so this did nothing for my flying jitters.
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I used to get queasy too , during landing and takeoff but I am trying to be brave now lol high time we let go of our fears. 🤓
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A haywire Limerick from Yaskhan
Written without any plan
With word placed on a page
Did her reader engage
Does not matter if it does not scan?
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Wow , Chris , that is nice. Thank you for taking this limerick to another dimension.
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Thanks Yassy I wouldn’t quite call it a wow
To you I’ll gratuitously bow
And say that’s terrific
From one so prolific
I’ll sign off with, that’s all for now.
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You are awesome , Chris. Amazingly creative.
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Oh! Joy! You whimsy wonderfully! I will have to go back and count the lines to see if you two o’erflew the boundary of That delicious slice of Erie.
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I did no syllable count for limerick as I read , so you understand the need to just be !!
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My syllables went berserk.
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Limerick lost its syllable count , darn😏😒😞
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I love this – “a bird take me fly on her fragile”
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Thanks.
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