When a poet is broken
All the words have been spoken.
When pages have been shredded
And ink drained and wetted.
And when the heart stumbled
With words I fumbled.
When things don't feel right
Sadness one cannot fight.
Sometimes the tears don't fall
One needs a shoulder to bawl.
I dip my pen in the inkwell of my blood
Wait for the words to break free and flood.
Opening the floodgates of my heart
And see the sorrow flow and depart.
Then I realize it's all been a dream
Things are just not the way they seem.
Oh thank goodness, it was just a dream! I wish that never happens to anyone…
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Oh yeah ! Thank you , Vandana. ๐๐
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Hi Yassy,
Every great dream begins with a dreamer.
Great poem
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Hi Ben, I love what you said. Every great dream begins with a dreamer. Like a title of a poem or more like a poem itself. Very inspiring. Thank you , Ben.
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You are so welcome Yassy. Stay inspirational
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Amazing as always. My favorite line was “I dip my pen in the inkwell of my blood”. Keep writing amazing stuff ๐
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Thank you , Tavleen๐๐ค
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And your ending says it all!โค๏ธ
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Great poem.
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Thank you.
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Gorgeous from the first line to the last!
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Thank you , G!
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The way things are arenโt always how theyโre meant to be, thatโs why some call them dreams.๐
Love your variety of style Yassy, like I said before my friend…you are a dream. A dream come true to poetry.๐ซ
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Yes, you are right , my friend . You say it well. In fact I am reading your connect again. You are a wise one !
And you got that too. I try to vary the form I am writing in . So you are spot on in understanding that.
I think life is like a dream , Jo! It’s a nice dream , sometimes a nightmare dream lol !
As long as we have poetry , the dream goes on.
You take care and thank you talking. You are good ๐๐
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Thank you Yassy, you understand me so well and thatโs a treat.
You have so many forms of styles and itโs so impressive and it is a treat to read your writing.
And yes, life can be a dream or a nightmare but itโs what we make it. We choose the colors of our rainbows at times๐ and with writers like you, the colors are beautiful. You take care too. ๐๐
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I love this!
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Thank you sweetie pie.
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Beautiful poetry indeed!
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Thank you , Nico. Peace !
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Blessings!
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Just loved it Yassy!
Beautifully penned โค
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Thank you , Soiba๐๐
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It makes me sad and happy at the same time :(:)
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It’s just a poem , my dear honey bunny.
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And a good one because it stirred my emotions. IThat’s when I know it is good :):)
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Wow! Superb work today. I like!
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Oh thank you , Jim !!
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This built to a climax very nicely. ๐
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Thanks, Flint.
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Dayumm!! Love this… Reasons why-
1. Heartfelt
2. Proper use of words
3. Great ending
Keep it up!! ๐
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Thank you , Tanishq๐
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So beautiful!
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Thank you , Michael ๐๐
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This is so compelling, Yassy. The last two lines are a great twist to the story told here.
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I think I love playing with words. Words let you do a lot ! Thank you , Robbie.
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I love this one I read it out loud! ๐
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Oh ! Thank you so much ๐
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This was great. Thanks for sharingn
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Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment.
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words play a beautiful role in life. Beautiful lines๐
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Yeah ๐Thankx.
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love the way it has been constructed.
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I so thank you.
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Not a problem.I had real pleasure reading this.
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On point ๐
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Very beautiful Yassy.
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Thank you so much for reading , Holly.
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It was my pleasure Yassy, absolutely beautiful!
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wow
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Reblogged this on Ned Hamson's Second Line View of the News.
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