Like a whisper in my dream
Murmurs tease quintessence of my psyche
Burning emotions turn to words
Shattering stars in my eyes
This singing to me, in my highs and my lows.
Dialect of my thoughts
In eternal oasis of
Swirling blossoms..that put the wind in motion
Caught in its embrace...like spring flowering
And dew-glow on my breath.
I evanesce in the unknowing
As I sink in the blue-blooded ocean
The sky is my parasol.
I surface
Glowing in pixie dust...
I court destiny.....
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Beautiful & skillful… Kudos!
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Thank you so much , Emmπ
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You’re welcome π
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Beautiful Yassy! May your new week be blessed in wonderful ways my sister!
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Thanks bro, may yours be wonderful and blessed and safe.
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May love rain on your dream and flow out to others
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Thank you for your kind thoughts , Peter.
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May destiny great you with welcome arms…
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Oh! Thanks , Medlen. π
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I feel like classmates being called that! π
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Yeah π
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Beautiful piece.. destiny will be helpless with such poetic courting π
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Thank you , Eric. π
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Very beautiful writing… π
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Thank you π
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Thank you
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This is an exceptional piece. Actually, this is the best I read today!
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Thank you my dear , G! You take care.
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Absolutely lovely Yassy, you glow regardless whether in pixie dust or not. You have an aura and your words are amazing that makes your readers glow. Another Poetry potion in motion.πΉπΉ
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You say the most sweetest of words , dear buddy . Aw! I feel so damn nice , a gentle heart you have my friend. Thank you dear one.
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You write amazing and mesmerizing words Yassy. Comments are only compliments to the chef my dearπΉπΉ
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This chef is happy.
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As she should be because you make slot of people happy and Iβm one of them. ππ
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Wow. Lots of quotable lines there!
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So nice! Kaisi hai, Y?
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Thanks ! I will survive lol ! Hope you are well.
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Yo!
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Oi !
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courting destiny… intriguing concept… I will muse over it..
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Oh yeah ππ€
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“I court destiny,” what a wonderful and powerful last line yassy and it seems to fit perfectly in describing the poet at work. The line also takes you back into the first line of the poem and gives it a feel of being on a continuous loop. A bit like the poet moving from one poem to another. Excellent poetry.
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Thank you , Davy. You say the most fabulous things about my poetry. Thank you. I am honored.
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Aye π
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Beautiful and such breathtaking words … βThe sky is my parasol …β great stuff! Thanks, Yassy. βοΈπβοΈ
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Thank you , my dear ππ€
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Beautiful ethereal poetry Yassy.
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Thank you π
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Love those last three lines!
I surface
Glowing in pixie dust…
I court destiny…..
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Tigreπ, thank you my dear friend.
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“the sky is my parasol” I love that line!!
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Thank you π
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Each line is ethereal. π β€
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Thanh you oyeπ€
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Beautiful!!!!!
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Thank you ππ
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Thank you.
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Very smart poem!
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Beautiful expressions!
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Thank you.
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Beautiful image. Sinking into the blue blood ocean. Goose bumps
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Thank you , Kimberly.
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Reblogged this on The sense.
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Thank you π
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my pleasure π
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