twilight dreams of night an erubescent sky burns carrying slumber's lilac breath duskfall flames aurum as a crepescule succumbs to a sparkling galaxy night's whispered breath spills the satin of soundlessness I decipher....
twilight dreams of night an erubescent sky burns carrying slumber's lilac breath duskfall flames aurum as a crepescule succumbs to a sparkling galaxy night's whispered breath spills the satin of soundlessness I decipher....
yaskhan 
wow. strong words with so much imagery. nice
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Thank you , Lou.
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Beautifully written!
Meno<3
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Thank you , Meno.
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Your words are beautiful Yassy and the way you combine them is a dream. This was amazing, reading and visualizing the magic of the night skies is all I see. Pure beauty.🌹🌹
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Hello , Jo ! Thank you 😊🤗 my fre
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Sorry, that just flew from my fingers , Jo Wo. Thank you for your awesome words , Wilde.
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No problem Yassy!! 😊😊
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😊😊
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😁😁
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“nights whispered breath spills”..this is such a powerful speech Y!
I am so glad to read your words while I struggle to write mine.
Love!
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Thank you , D!
For the past few days, I been struggling. I just can’t imagine you struggling with words. You have always been effortless in your writing.
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I know I shall be fine too and move on the way you did..the way we all do.
Take care.❤️
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We will survive !!! You take care too. Be well. 💖
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so perfect
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I so thank you.
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Beautiful, as always
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Thank you very much , Michael. Take care.
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Beautiful.
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Thank you , Aisha.
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😊😊
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😊🤗
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Oh so lovely!
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Oh! Thank you , Tara. 😊
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Beautiful poetry.
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Thank you , Nico.
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Peace.
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Peace 😊
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The strength in your visual poem is moving and so good.
This video is for your poem: Hope you like it.
Nine Inch Nails – In This Twilight
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Thank you , Charlie.
It’s an awesome song. Love the video too. I have heard the songs of nin that you told me about but I missed this twilight number.
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You are welcome. 🙂
I knew you’d love that song. It speaks so deeply and musically. 🙂
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😊🤗
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I read it in the morning, but I am sorry I did not have time to comment. This is a jewel! “night’s whispered breath spills/the satin of soundlessness” marvelous lines! lots of love to you. my dear Y. !
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Thank you , G. I love reading your work and never miss. It’s just that I wrote after a spell and I feel down under. But thank you for your awesome appreciation.
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My dear Y, your work is magnificent, and I always read it. I am so sorry about the way you feel. Sending you lots of love and good thoughts. G
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I am thinking , what names begin with G. Oh ! 😔 sorry. I am dying of curiosity ! Can I call you Gwendolyn ? Don’t mind me 😉😀
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Yes, you can, my dear Y :). I love that name! It’s beautiful!
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Okay , I call you Gwendolyn 🤗💖
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This is so pretty, Yassy. I salute you.
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Thank you my dear , I have missed you. Hope you are fine now.
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Your poetry paints a magnificent picture yassy. The last stanza makes me want to dive into that soundlessness.
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Thank you , Davy
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Absolutely lovely.
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Gah! Gorgeous!
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Thank you dearest.
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Ugh, we should all be thanking you, all the time, for all of this beauty you share. Sincerely.
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You are so nice , you are a genuine person , Venessa. Oh ! I am so happy I know you. Look after yourself well.
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Aww thank you. I am so happy too, Yasmin!
And thank you, you too!!
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😊🤗💖
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erubescent. love that word. Teach me more senpai!!
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What is senpai ?
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it means elder one looks up to 😀
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Okay kiddo
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This feels so surreal. Amazing words.
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Thank you , Carter 🙂😊💖
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