I rhyme my way across the page Letting words out of this poetic cage. I pick up a quill soaking wet Shaping syllables into a vignette. My eyes whisper words unsaid Sharing from a heart that once bled. From my eyes to my fingers Soulful cries that linger... My teardrops become my words When sealed sentiments have been stirred. Lines become bridges that travel Across pages..poems unravel Motionless words take on a new life Like notes that fly from a fife. I take my dreams and put it on a page A place to run, to play, sans chantage. I am a poet, a dreamer Poetry feeds my soul, my sanity's keeper.
I loved the poem. And the last two sentences were fantastic.
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Thank you very much , Nitin.
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the thoughts give me the words to stitch myself.
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Yeah. That is so nice , Akansksh
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I really do like your rhyming poetry, Yassy. Rhyming always pleases me somehow.
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Thank you π, I think I like yours very much , Robbie. You do some very great rhymes.
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Your page … indeed.
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Thank you π, Eric.
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Happy new year, Yassy! π
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A very happy and blessed 2018 to you , my dear.
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Thank you! π
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Welcome π
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From my eyes to my fingers
Soulful cries that linger…nyc one yassy! Happy new year
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Thank you π! A very happy new year to you.
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Nyc rhymes yassy!…I love this….happy new year by the way yassy
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The best to you !! Thank you π
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“my teardrop became my words”..
Missed reading your magical words Yassy!!
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Thank you , Devika. I have missed your posts too. Will head there right away.
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I absolutely loved this, it flowed like the smoothest river. Each line complimented the next so well Yassy and I loved the opening verse. That was the escape to poetry ecstasy. The cage opened and there was no stopping Yassyβs magic. Lovely rhyme, a beautiful ode. Kicking off New Years with fireworks!!! Yassy still a star.π«
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Hey Hey Brain guy , can’t thank you enough for the most awesomemest comment ! Gave me a high ππ oh! Buddy buddy of mine, your the swellest of them all !
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No one tops you Yassyπ
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Thanks πβΊοΈ
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Youβre so welcomeππ
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rhyming expressions!!!!! beautiful!!!!
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Thank you my dear.
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Love it yassy. The words, the flow are all exquisite. The last couplet is the perfect description for the poet.
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Thank you , Davy. I am glad you like it. Your appreciation is so esteemed.
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Lines become bridges that travel…..can something be more beautiful than that? Loved the composition of your Page, Yasmin π
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Thank you , Radha. Happy new year my dearest friend . My words bridge the gap between our cities ! We travel the distance with this awesome blog.
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True Yasmin. Hope 2018 is a glorious one for you too! Always a pleasure reading your work. Keep them coming π
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Fully utilised rhyme in an interesting and captivating manner. Enjoyed the poemπ
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Thank you π, Adrian. Happy new year to you.
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I can’t open your page , Adrian. Wanted to follow you but it says the page no longer exists. Send me a link .
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Okay wait a bit
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Yeah
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https://myworld021.wordpress.com/
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Okay I followed you. Just confirm whether I did. Your never know sometimes.
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Yes you did. Thanks
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Splendid! Poetry is indeed your soul yassy π A Very Happy New Year my dear!
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Thank you , Vandana! A very happy healthy and safe year to you.
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What a piece! Beauty, talent, life! Exceptional!
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Thank you so much. You really are too generous with your praise.
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Oh no, you are very relented! You are a beautiful poem!
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Lovely poem!
Happy New Year
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Thank you. Happy new year to you too.
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Yassy…I never get email notices of your posts anymore?? Hard to find your new posts in a sea of many others. Have a super New Year!
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What about your reader ? I also miss posts from the bloggers I follow. I miss yours too.
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You have a good year too.
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I like that line “I am a poet, a dreamer” π
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Thank you , Christy.
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Yes you are a poet, Happy New Year Yassy.
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Happy new year to you, Chris.
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I love the “my sanity’s keeper”. Your writing is simple and really really beautiful
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Thank you , Gustaf. Happy new year.
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Happy new year π
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Brilliantly done, Y! Great beginning to the new year!
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Thankx Kunal. Happy new year buddy.
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Just lovely. This reminds me why I love couplets. π
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Thank you π
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Very real words. Writing poetry is like cutting open a vein and you were able to put this to words:)
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So happy you like it. Thank you.
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Beautiful words as always. β€
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Thankx , Carter π
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Wow Yassy, you sweet creature, I don’t remember seeing you compose in this form before. It is divine!
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Thank you my dear.
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Your writing style is so unique and distinct. It amazes me how you write so well and with such beauty
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Thank you π. I only know that I love to write and I want to do just that.
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I relate so much.
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Thank you.
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Very good opening. I’d like to say I’m impressed, but at this point that would be a cliche, wouldn’t it???
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Yup!
Where do you disappear, Michael. ?
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Oh, I linger here and there, but seem to always come up short when reading your own poems. Miss you by the way.
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This is really great!
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Thanks.
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Welcome – enjoy your blog very much
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Yeah. Really. Thanks
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Welcome!
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Thank you!
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Oh btw like your logo
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Thank you!
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Welcome!
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Wow. It’s beautiful.
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Thank you.
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You had me at “I rhyme my way across the page
Letting words out of this poetic cage.”
Loved it!
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Thank you , Susi! Thank you thank you πππ
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Beautiful portrayal of feeling. Anand Bose from Kerala
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Truly beautiful!!π
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Thank you so very much .
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford.
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Thank you for the reblog, Jonathan.
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THANKS FOR ANOTHER GREAT POST, YASSY!
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Most lovely and emotional poem like a soliloquy by using amazing metaphors.this poem is not only poem but a speaking self-portriat . Gorgeous,my dear yassy.you have a beautiful heart.love you.β€ππππβ€
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You have a beautiful and kind heart, Aruna β€οΈπΉ
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You are too same,my dear yassy.love ‘n bless you.π€β€πΉπΉβ€π€
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Thank you π
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