My fingers tingle, ignite From a fire that burns my soul Fuel that sparkles my ink dreams Edge of paradise. I discover love Through luster of distance, time The stars hold our fire. I linger under A ruby moon,smattering Of tourmaline stars Shine on me like ancient gold Evanescing paradise.
yaskhan 
marvelous!
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Thank you 😊
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Beautiful words, Yassy. I love the first two lines.
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Thank you my dear.
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Discovering love through the lustre of distance is such an ethereal expression. Love this, Yassy.
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Yes, but it can happen , Nan!
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Yes of course
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😘🤗
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The moon and stars grow pale in the light of your beautiful words ❤
People have always wondered what is at the edge of the world. What is at the edge of paradise? Love, true love like fire embraces the soul.
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What beautiful wonderful thoughts emanate from that awesome heart of yours , Lulia. Your comment is poetry in its finest form. I feel blessed and honored to have you read my work.
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Thank you! But they were inspired by your wonderful words. As always, Iulia ❤
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❤️❤️❤️❤️
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❤
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Love the last paragraph. It creates a beautiful image.
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Thank you.
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Writing and poetry that takes us into paradise yassy. Thank you for this lovely piece.
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Thank you 😊, Davy.
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Out of this world sweet Yassy. It is longing and loving :):) What a perfect way to start of my afternoon :):)
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Thank you dearest. Be well.
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Truly magical words!
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Thank you , Leigha.
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You’re welcome.
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😊😘
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Your words are so beautiful.❤
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Thank you my dear
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Oh! Nice dp.
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Haha. Thanks.😊
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Welcome 😊👍
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Nice article
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Thank you.
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And I hope you fall over the edge, Y! 😉
Lovely!
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I have already fallen over the edge 😐🙄😒
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LOL, not that edge, silly…pyaarwala
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I know which edge 😂 lol
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Chalo, good then, I’m happy for you
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Thank you Kunal ! You are so nice.
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“I discover love / Through the luster of distance, time”
You’ve done it again: put into words something that I’ve been going through but never able to express. I read this and went, that’s exactly right.
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How nice. It’s like we are all connected in some way. I feel so nice when I read what you express. Thank you my dear.
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“edge of paradise”- my favorite line. your writing is always so lovely.
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Thank you, Angie.
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Wonderful!
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Thank you ☺️
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Beautiful as usual!!!!
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Thank you sooo much , Shreya ❤️
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