The scarlet of my lips Curve into an amethyst smile Amblygonite pushes smalt Breathing nerves of gold In opaline dreams Fragrance of ancient framboise Spill on muslin garbs Of roseate commitment Poetry's sweet alyssum #dodoitsu#tanka
The scarlet of my lips Curve into an amethyst smile Amblygonite pushes smalt Breathing nerves of gold In opaline dreams Fragrance of ancient framboise Spill on muslin garbs Of roseate commitment Poetry's sweet alyssum #dodoitsu#tanka
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A most intriguing poem, Yassy. Well done.
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Thank you 😊, Robbie. Enjoy your Sunday.
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Wonderful !!
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Thank you.
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I didn’t even know what amethyst was until I went to China to teach English and one of my students chose that it as her English name.
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So exotic. I am deeply fascinated with gems and flowers ! They have beautiful meanings attached to them.
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beautiful……….
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Thank you , Sudhir.
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Beautiful mystic poem, Yassy.
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Thank you so much , Francina.
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Oh crap! My reader was not showing your mesmerizing posts somehow.
This is beyond poignant words!😊
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Happens to me all the time. The reader just acts up and I miss posts from people I follow.
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Love the flow
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Thankx , Carter.
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Thank you.
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Nature’s beauty captured in this wonderful poem yassy. There is magic in the way you have crafted these words.
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I think we poets love our words , that is why as a reader you appreciate it ! Thank you 😊
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Lovely one! 🙂
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Thank you 😊, Sheetal.
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My pleasure. 🙂
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This is beautiful Yassy 🙂
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😊😘
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If your words were scented, they’d be as sweet as your poetry……your are “scently” amazing.
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Oh wow thanks , Jo. You are sweet.
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You’re welcome, and so are you. 🙂
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😊
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Incredible with the choice of words you used. Your poem here is s scent of delicious poetry that I hunger for its influence and inspiring every time I read your poems. Yassy, this poem is gold. 🙂
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Thank you , Charlie. 😊
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This makes me want to try harder to use more diverse diction in my own work. Beautifully done as always!
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Thank you so much. Such a heartwarming thought , inspiring me to write better.
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I look forward to reading and being further inspired by your future work.
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😊🙂
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