I take a pause breathing in the chorus of nature's movement I walk into the green of arching trees and twining brambles, my breath toasted by the delicate scents of hidden flowers. Shadows whirl against swirling treetops..glowing a golden roam guides my steps..i sit in a slow sunset Birds twitter into nectar misted dew warmed by sunbeams on the bosom of fuschias, geraniums, marigolds and dahlias. Pungent odors from the soil strike air...,lingering..tracing heat. birds whistle into the air...a sigh breaks from my lips Late beam of the sun touches my shoulder...soft winds croon me to slumber..night vanishes..silent dreams reel into morning calm awaking release of falling stars... dawn undresses my dreams spilling her mystique
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Something about this was extremely magical and surreal.
Beautifully penned!:)
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Thank you 😊!🙂🤗
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My forest walk later in the afternoon will have a whole new meaning, beautiful words Yassy.
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Enjoy your walk, Chris. I envy you 😊!
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Lovely words about things most people walk past and don’t even notice, Lady Yasmin.
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You are right, Lord Zoolon!
Thank you 😊!
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Wow, Yassy. This is quite amazing.
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Thank you 😊, Robbie !
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I tried to go for a walk in the local park twice a week. At first it was just for exercise, since my doctor is on my case about my A1C levels, but now I bring a camera, too.
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Do you post pictures on your blog?
I hope whatever ails you , goes away. Take care.
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I write my posts around my pictures, but they are of my foreign travels most of the time.
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Yes, I follow your blog and I find it quite interesting.
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Your words make me want to wander in nature for days! I love the way your poems have this effortlessness and breathless beauty. You paint pictures in my brain and I swear I could smell the flowers as I picture you walking. You’re incredible 😊😘❤️
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Oh ! To walk among the trees and the blooms with my darling twin ! I can almost picture us walking two laughing siblings , your shining face with that crown of glorious hair , the tinkle of your laughter , the birds fly with us , chatting up a melody …let’s let’s …,
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I can picture it too. The thought alone makes me smile!
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A stunning description of the coming of dawn. The personification in the last stanza is simply beautiful. Great writing, Yassy.
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Thank you , Aly. It’s been awhile since I visited your blog. Weather is getting to me !
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Most welcome, Yassy. It’s okay, the blog is always open.
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Yes! 😊
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So love the end.
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Thank you , Asha.
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I close my eyes and I’m there. That’s how evocative your poetry is! ❤
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Thank you 🤗 , Sailaja! You say the nicest things and I feel so awesome.
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You are welcome! ❤❤❤❤
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What a beautiful sunset, the evening taking shape under the mellowing skies, that wonderful yellowish orange caressing everything. What an amazing scene you painted for us Yassy. It’s nourishing. 🙂
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Thank you for reading , Maggi girl. Thank you for your beautiful thoughts. So poetic. 🤗😘
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😊😘
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Okay.
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Very funny !
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Yes. So much humour can’t take a pause.
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Can’t see any , humor, I mean. You can laugh alone
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At mankind?
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I throw up my hands in despair when I am talking to you. Go away lol
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What if I never come back?
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Touché
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A coffee would have been nice before parting.
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Superb poetry yassy. It captures the very essence of nature and what we can miss if we don’t stop and take time out to embrace it.
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You said it beautifully, Davy. Thank you.
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It was wonderful poetry yassy 🙂
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😊🙂
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we’ll embrace nature
it will be here when we’re gone
will it miss us
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It will miss us , Mick , cus we write poetry about them. Nature is a celebration of life. It gives so much.
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I too take a pause
waiting, waiting,
for now you will
of read my praise
of nature, of you too,
Precious Lady
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You are too kind to me , Mick Precious.
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my words are but echoes
of my heart felt feeling
Precious Lady
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Be safe be happy be well , Mick. You are truly my precious buddy.
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Back at ya!
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Reblogged this on Go Dog Go Café and commented:
Yassy in Poetry
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Thank you 😊 very much , Christine 😊!
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It is a lovely piece– happy to share it
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Lovely write yassy,so vivid !
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Thank you
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I’ll sing your praises
till I die
your poetry
part of why!
the joy of nature
our love for it
the splendors
it bestows on us
you do it justice
well worth the fuss
to join in with the birds
sing its praises
its scents, aromas
its proud to share
you know,
you taste, you smell it
your there
I walk with you
in my dreams
you, nature, me
the perfect trio
write on
Precious Lady
write on!
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Thank you 😊 for sharing this nature’s treat with me. It’s great fun walking and talking with you.
Thank you , Mick.
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Your right
nature is a celebration
of life
shame is that it is but a few
that share its delight
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We are blessed to be able to enjoy it. And for those who don’t , well, it’s their loss.
We enjoy nature and we write about it. That in itself is something to celebrate about. I thank you for being here with me !
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you sit on my shoulder
your inspirations
ride with me!
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😊🙋🏻
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Your work here reminded me of poets taking a walk at the park or anywhere else.
They sit and absorb everything around them and taking it all in.
A pen on paper all the most beautiful words of poetry are being painted with heart and soul.
And you my friend, did just that. Incredible!
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Charlie , why is my comment on your last post says anonymous
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I’d like ask you that myself too. I have no idea why.
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I think I found out why? I logged in from my mobile .
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oh…that’s why then. Mystery solved. 🙂
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Lol yes hahahahaha
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You are a poet , a writer , so you understand theses things , these feelings that need to be put into words !
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Correct. Your work always continues to push new grounds. I’ve always liked that about your work. 🙂
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I like doing new stuff. I would like to write a lyrical po now.
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You are a poet , a writer , so you understand theses things , these feelings that motivation to be put into words ! I like doing newfangled material.
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Thank you for reading my work. Thank you so much for your kind thoughts.
The best to you in all your ventures.
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So lovely
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Thank you 😊
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An awesome visual poem!! Excellent ☺♥
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Thank you 😊, Phil.
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This made me crave to be in nature. Thank you.
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So welcome. Have a gorgeous weekend.
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Thank you 😊
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Well expressed
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Thankx , Payal.
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Welcome Yassy 🙂
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Thank you ! Thank you
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This reminds me of the famous Sanskrit epic Valmiki Ramayana where some chapters conclude in the same vein as is yours in this verse. No exaggeration!
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Thank you, Vinay.
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