Inspired yet again by Allen Ginsberg I also thank Charlie. The ghost of my dreams talked to me I shut it up with sleep Then dreams invaded my sleep I caught them, seeing the fantasy I woke to a fantasy that eluded memory Lost in sepia..unattainable-desolation lingered I went into life...and did my life..my time here Imagery on my mind...some comfort Work was like dagger piercing my nerves Nerve cells shouted I could not stop Life did not stop its tirade Its beating I had this intelligent oxygen...in my brain Telling me otherwise I had to go on That was the truth of my dreams A semi-black fate.
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That really speaks to me. And, though we have never met face to face, you know why.
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Miss talking to you !
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Likewise. “Things” have been grabbing my attention, so I am away at times these days. Hope all is well with you and your part of the world. (We have floods here; I am about 300 km north of Houston.)
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Hope you are well. Be safe. I am okay.
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A bit overwhelmed at the moment by “things.” It is a long list. Storms have been just light rain up here in DFW, but as you likely know Austin / Houston were slammed and they will likely have devastation as big, or bigger, than Katrina. Nobody seems willing to talk about this, but hurricane season is not over. They could be hit again….
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You better take care! It’s quite worrying. If you have to move , you have to. Don’t take chances. Better be safe. Not worth taking undue risks.
Just drop a line now and then to say you are okay.
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I really do appreciate that you care. When I wrote that little bio of mine that says I like chatting with my international friends, you were one of the people I was thinking of!
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Oh! Thank you , Grant. Likewise!
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Oh ! I hope these ‘things’ aren’t hurting you.
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Sick relatives. Sick friends. Sick pets. The usual complaints from myself. I could make a list, but it is a bit too personal for the ‘net. And, when it has been happening for some time, you start to become a bit numb to things that are utterly awful. (There is a good start to a poem for you: Numb to the awful, I live from day to day….)
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Numb to the awful ! Sounds awful , Grant. You shouldn’t let it get to you. Nothing is worth the pain. You have to come out of it.
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Thanks for the encouragement. Maybe I should write the poem myself! 🙂
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Please, I hope you write !
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“I had this intelligent oxygen” this is a clever line that clearly depicts the power of your spirit. I really connect with the connotation of moving on in life!
A powerful write-up once again!:)
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Writin is so much us. I can connect and bond with you well because your poetry speaks to my soul. It’s simply mind blowing. I have been so wanting to read your kind of work.
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Yassy, you are a brilliant writer and these words coming from you mean so much to me.
You are a real gem.☺
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And so are you, A very versatile writer.
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The opening lines of this poem are truly inspirational, Yassy. A wonderful read.
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Thank you , Robbie. Something different. I like to try my hand at different themes.
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I’m positively enchanted.
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I am so grateful for your kind words of appreciation. Thank you.
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To go on … You said it so beautifully, Yasmin.
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Thank you so much for the support you have always shown , I am so grateful and happy 😊 can’t thank you enough, Sailaja. You inspire the best in me. 😘🤗
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I am humbled by the faith you have in me. Thank you.
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I am blessed to have you as a friend. Your a good person, Sailaja. I am going to tweet your last post.
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Awwww. 😙😙😙😙
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Thank you my kindest and dearest friend.
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Life’s circumstances bring us days like this while for some it’s a daily occurrence. I really love this, Yassy, and felt the ache in each line, as the speaker does ‘time’ and keeps on going. Some of us work from the time we are old enough to carry ourselves and our lives become prisons where dreams are our only escapes. Were you reading Ginsber’s “Howl” before writing this?
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Yes, I been reading ‘Howl’ too and a lot of his other poems. It opened my mind immensely immeasurably! Life gives us these circumstances and maybe imprison us with this thing called fate. I am glad you got the gist. You have understood more than I expected ! Thank you , Aly Aly
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Ginsberg was a great Beat writer and his work has such impact. It is always good to broaden ones mind and therefore insights by reading widely. I am grateful to be able to read your inspired and inspiring work. This piece made me think of the lives of our aboriginal peoples in the wake of being displaced by colonial competition, it made me think of those impacted by slavery and it made me think of the millions of refugees looking for a little sepia in their war torn lives. Then it made me think that maybe the prisons we find ourselves in sometimes, could both be physical and mental. Either way, your piece has sent my thoughts to hold a conference and I have no idea what will come of it. You are most welcome, my friend!
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Aw! I do love your thoughts. So interesting intuitive and aesthetic. It’s been an enriching experience just to be able to hear your thoughts.
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Am always happy to share them, my friend 🙂
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Good for us. 🙂
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Yes, indeed 🙂
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Absolutely!!!!!
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You must read franz Kafka quotes. So enlightening. Aly Aly !
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Will check them out!
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Intelligent Oxygen. Where can we buy that yassy? Great poetry.
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You have it in your system , Davy.
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Some days it goes missing yassy, according to my dear wife 🙂
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lol 😂 it needs a break too , I guess. Tell the missus that.
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I will yassy 🙂
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Good luck with wifey
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🙂 🙂 🙂
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wonderfully worded description of this journey.
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Thank you 😊🤗😘
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That was awesome Yassy. I don’t think you know what gravitational effect your writing has on your readers, your talent is beyond Earthly. 🌏
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Hang on, Jo Wo. Here, hold on to my arm , we don’t want you floating away in gravity .
I am an earthling lol 😂 I feel like a spirit. A genie in a WordPress.
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You are an Angel in WordPress Yassy. 😇. A wish that has been granted.💫
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And archangel Jo!
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Oy!
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Nerve cells shouted yes, the intelligent oxygen seeks to connect to all the spirit in this world and bind together to rise up against the evil that is taking hostage of our very own planet.
Powerfully written poem yassy. A beat poetry that is refreshing and holds truth of today. 🙂
I’m so proud of you. 🙂
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You have always been kind to me , Charlie. I think that gave me the courage and fired the inspiration to write.
I still think you say the nicest things. Thank you.
It’s my own little way of saying I am grateful to you for the encouragement. 😊😊
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Kindness and friendship are the spirits of good karma and balancing the universe. 🙂
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Your quite an institution in yourself , Charlie. 😊
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🙂 🙂
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intelligent oxygen…
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Really cool that I saw this today, since I’ve been having some really vivid dreams lately. Thanks for writing and sharing.
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Hope your dreams are good.
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In the first one I was being attacked by a dinosaur that came alive in a museum. Odd, since I haven’t seen the Night at the Museum movie in years. The second one someone tried to hurt my cat…. so, yeah, not so nice. 😝
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Wow colorful dreams. There must be some mysticism about it. Anyways ! Take care.
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Oh, I have some idea what’s going on…. Thanks. You take care too.
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Thank you 😊
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I’m so inspired. Nice writing. What inspired you this well?
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Allen Ginsberg.
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Then I should check out
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Check out ‘ beat poetry ‘
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I would also. Thanks b!
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Awesome content…i truely appreciate💕
Check out my blogs. These are all about the cost effective fashion and beauty tips. Hope you like it 😊
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Yeah. Thanks.
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Thank you 🙏🏼
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