I sit in evening's portrait anticipating twilight solace of peace enters me as nocturnal larks croon into the milky way stars serenade me gently shining 'pon my lucent tears my anguish subsides #dodoitsu
I sit in evening's portrait anticipating twilight solace of peace enters me as nocturnal larks croon into the milky way stars serenade me gently shining 'pon my lucent tears my anguish subsides #dodoitsu
Admiring art will often take our worldly woes away, even if it is for the duration of our admiration and watching the evening arrive, with its blended hues, is surely art. Better still if we can place ourselves within that art, which you have done here. I can see you, sitting in the evening, blending in with those changing hues, and I can see the anguish turn to calm as those loons offer their symphony to the universe. Ah, this is gorgeous, my dear Yassermaid.
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You understand well , my dear poet friend. Nature gives us so much. More than anybody can, actually.
Thank you , Aly Al Pacino.
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Yes, I do, my friend. I love nature and, like you, observe it often to take it all in. Life is good when nature brings a poet like you into my world. Thank you for being a constant in my universe, Yasmine. Truly, from the depth’s of this Pacino’s heart!! π (Imagine an emoji for a flower here as I am emoji-challenged) π π β€
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Look, flowers πΊ for my friend πΌπΈππ»πΊ.
Thank you ππ»
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Am blushing and smiling and feeling all fuzzy!!!!!!! Thank you for this bouquet, my dear friend!!
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Your welcome, Aly! Anything for the Godfather!
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Your words are like warm blanket Yassy!
Loved it.
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Thank you my dear girl. You have a gorgeous weekend, my beautiful friend.
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The stars serenade you! I love that
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Oh! Thank you so much , Medza! What a beautiful nameπ
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Aaaaaaw. thanks too
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Aw. Welcome dear.
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Your language is magical, it’s as though you’re exchanging different elements of beauty with your surroundings.
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Ah! What a beautiful thing to say. I am sure it comes from a beautiful mind. I so thank you π very much for reading my work.
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Aw you’re so sweet π Thank you so much for sharing your work!
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Losing ourselves in the stars is a meditative act.
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Yeah! You are right. Looking at the stars is so calming ! Thank you π
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My pleasure to read your words.
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This is amazing, Yassy. I don’t know how you come up with these incredibly beautiful phrases.
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Maybe this family of bloggers that I have come to so adore, inspires me to write these little poems. I have to thank you , Robbie.
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I love your poems, Yassy, and you keep getting better and better.
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Thank you again. Means a lot to me.
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Nature puts on a show for you for free, Lady Yasmin
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Nature is generous, Lord Zoolon. Thank you.
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My most favourite time. So, alone and yet surrounded by all the wonders that shine in the night. This is lovely. π
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I love the solitude , nature gives one the peace and solitude. I think we both are alike , we like the wonders of nature.
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Nature always seem to want me :):) it is my friend π
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what does the landscape look like where you are my lovely?
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This really fits my mood of late. Beautifully written!
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Thank you , M.
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You’re welcome Yassy. π
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A nice, peaceful poem. Thank you for sharing.
Kathrin — http://mycupofenglishtea.wordpress.com
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Thank you π
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We oft sit together, my muse.
In our adjoining solitudes,
exchanging glances,
as we pass on journeys
to and from the stars.
Me to read your bespoke words
You, to turn your word laden pages
Your written treasures, words of gold.
Each page you turn, a new story told.
If it stills your anguish, write on.
The evening larks lulling your senses
Sleep opens your eyes,
To dream of far away places
It will dawn soon enough, dream on!
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I can almost touch you as I read this. The power of your words, Mick. I am happy to be in their poetic journey with you , my best friend Mick.
For me, poetry is dawn ! I love this journey that I take because it lets me dream .
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Your vibes whisper to me at night
Wake up, wake up, it’s time to write
Awake, I can not see
Dawns beauty blinding me
I look again, it was not dawn
It was your words, golden
Raining down beams of light
Their beauty, precious, a delight
If only it was every day
Your words to guide me on my way
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Poetry knows no sleep, knows no night and no dawn. Your words are so beautiful, Mick. You write beautifully. Such a beautiful mind.
Thank you π
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It is what you inspire!
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Thank you, Precious.
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“I sit in evening’s portrait…” is a particularly strong image with which to start poem.
Another gem Jasmine.
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Great work.
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I can sit outside, close my eyes and read this and feel right at home Yassy. You have such an elemental way of bringing feeling out of readers that it’s truly amazing. πΉ
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Really , Jo. Wow. I feel so nice reading your comment. It’s unbelievable what words can do.
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It’s unbelievable what you can do with words Yassy. π
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It’s unbelievable what kind words can do, Jo.
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It’s unbelievable what kind of words you can do Yass. π
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This was beautiful. Though I was tempted to wonder what caused the anguish in the first place. And also kind of said in my head solace as shoelace
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Where did the sun come out from today , Sudhanshoooooo
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Once in a while I feel like saving you from my indifference.
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Good for your conscience, if you have one , you must have one to talk like this. Thank Heavens.
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Will have to do a rain check on that
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Do whatever you have to do , Rain check sun check moon check lol
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You’re the moon. So I’d like to check that.
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It’s day time so I am not there
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Yeah not there for those who cannot see beyond.
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Chashmish! Seeing through the beyond.
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As long as it helps to get to you.
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Happy festivities. Goodbye.
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No festivities without the moon!
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Be happy π, Sudhanshoo! It’s nice talking with you ! See you another day
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The high point of being human, when “anguish subsides”. That blissful peace between day and the coming of night.
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Hello , John. Thank you.
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beautiful
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Thank you π
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Beautiful poetry yassy. Nature provides us with everything we need.
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Thank you , Davy. I am going to your page. I seem to be not getting stuff on my reader from people I follow.
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WordPress has been playing up I think yassy π
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I see that I have missed a lot of your work.
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