Hearts transported, feet sinking into welcoming sand
Warm frothy waters caressing tanned skin
couples seek this treasure trove away from city’s din.
lovers captivated by the Golden Island
As the magnificent orb sets on a glorious day
Frolicking thoughts and passions play
An effervescent sky casts a seducing light
On Adriatic sea somnolent in evening’s twilight.
As the night climaxes into wee hours of morning
Horizon glows with effusion of new day dawning
The Lido of Venice, a lagoon enclosing love-in
Paradise, a haven where romance will never wear thin.
Powerful and visual poetry yassy. I have never been to Venice or the Lido, but your words made me feel I was reflecting on a place I had visited before.
Venice Lido, from the Venice film festival.. You are without borders, a voyager Calliope.. The middle lines are heavenly.. For some reason I remembered your Bedouin post.. Now I know why? Take care…
This is beautiful, Yassy. The movement from day to night is perfectly laid out to match the rise in passion. Exquisitely written, vivid, warm and inspirational. Had dreams of visiting Italy but those dreams have long passed. Thank you for taking me on a brief trip.
I love this. I got to visit Italy for around ten days earlier this year, and three of those were spent in Venice, leading up to New Years. You captured the feeling perfectly!
No I didn’t, unfortunately, and I was so jealous of everyone I saw checking in! It was a school trip, so we stayed in a city just outside of the island to save money and drove in every morning. Milano is definitely on the list when I study abroad!
Powerful and visual poetry yassy. I have never been to Venice or the Lido, but your words made me feel I was reflecting on a place I had visited before.
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Thank you , Davy.
I love the place.
You must visit.
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I will add it to my bucket list yassy 🙂
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Through your words I am whisked away into the moment you share with us here. Venice is a place I wish to visit and has come to me a lot recently.
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You must visit. I am sure you will plan your next vacation accordingly.
Thank you 😊 so much , Victoria.
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Venice Lido, from the Venice film festival.. You are without borders, a voyager Calliope.. The middle lines are heavenly.. For some reason I remembered your Bedouin post.. Now I know why? Take care…
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I love travelling , Zeus.
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I know, you are an embodiment of free spirit.. Literally..
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I may come knocking on your door some day, lol my spirit haha 😂
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Thank you for writing in, my dear friend.
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This is beautiful, Yassy. The movement from day to night is perfectly laid out to match the rise in passion. Exquisitely written, vivid, warm and inspirational. Had dreams of visiting Italy but those dreams have long passed. Thank you for taking me on a brief trip.
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Thank you , Al. Your comment is vividly poetic.
Ah! You can still travel. Take Jackie chan , round the world in , 😒 how many days can you manage ?
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Most welcome, Yassermaid. My traveling days are done but one can always read and dream.
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No way your travelling days are done. You are going to go globe trotting.
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Haha! I’ve traveled lots but my remaining days will be spent here. I’ve no urge to go further, my friend.
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I love this. I got to visit Italy for around ten days earlier this year, and three of those were spent in Venice, leading up to New Years. You captured the feeling perfectly!
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Did you stay on the grande canal. There are such quaint little hotels there.
Venice is a poet’s paradise.
You must like Milano too. It’s bliss.
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No I didn’t, unfortunately, and I was so jealous of everyone I saw checking in! It was a school trip, so we stayed in a city just outside of the island to save money and drove in every morning. Milano is definitely on the list when I study abroad!
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That is an awesome thought. Of course you will travel , to Milano and a lot of other places.
Wishing you well.
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Thank you! Keep up the good work with your poetry 😊
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Welcome! Thank you for reading my work.
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Ah, how very lovely, Yassy. A beautiful poem.
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Thank you. Maybe I will South Africa , one day.
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Hm, I really want to reblog this! May I?
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Please do.
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This is wonderful Yassy. Sounds like a completely sublime way to spend a day and night.
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Thank you , dear one.
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Great poem from one of my favorite writers!
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That is so sweet of you, Michael. I feel on top of the world. Thank you. 😊
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No prob! Really enjoyed the flow of the poem!
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I really enjoyed your work, and I nominated you for the Versatile Blogger Award! https://versatilebloggeraward.wordpress.com/about/
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Thank you for the honor.
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You’re welcome!
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I’m still cruising on my rendezvous from your wonderful words Yassy. Eyes closed with a smile on my face.
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I can hear you singing with the gondolier, Jo.
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I’ll pretend I have a good singing voice😁! My talking voice is great, but my singing is off key.
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The voice of Brain Freeze. The world went wild hearing you ! Lol what am I saying.
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😂. Yassy, only you can make it sound good.
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😊🙋🏻
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😉🙋🏽♂️
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I’ve been to Venice several times,it’s my favorite place in Italy…
but I didn’t know of this place.
I may have to check out next time.
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