I breathe this delicate breath of life I live in this sanctuary called life Like a ransom bequeathed by makers of destiny... The dictates that calculate defenses..surviving the suspense of endurance the survival of hope.. Freedom commits me not I endeavor to make touch the fire that spirits my sovereignty epiphanies echoe my agitated soul, as I do the arithemetic of my survival... a full circle that contours whimsical prophecies gone awry... I read my soul I pluck verses From the depths of my soul I become poetry and poetry becomes me... I burn gold.. #dramatic monologue
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Thank you , Afzal.
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always a pleasure, my friend
Peace ✌
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Take care !
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you too, friend 👍
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yassy, Crystal of http://crystalsphotobloggingsite.wordpress.com would like to nominate you for the One Lovely Blog Award.
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Thankx , Daisy.
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Your Welcome
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🤗😊
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😎😎
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Wonderful! May your soul keep burning gold 😄
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Thank you my good friend. So grateful to you.
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ah…. good to be back. I drink the water of your poetry Yassy, kindest…Tony
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Back from your travels, Tony? Good to see you.
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No travels yet, see my reply to your comment on my post on other site yesterday…
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Didn’t get no comment, Tony.
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oh…odd
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Yeah.
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Beautiful…may your fire continues to burn ..
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Thank you , Michnavs!
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” I become poetry and
poetry becomes me ”
These are wonderful lines yassy and they are gold in themselves. I am writing a post, about what is poetry, for the Go Dog Go Cafe on Thursday and would like to use them with your permission. I will link them back to this post 🙂
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Of course. Am honored. Oh wow. How nice of you , Davy. Go right ahead. Yay.
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Thanks yassy. It fits in perfectly with what I will be writing about 🙂
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Oh! I am looking forward to reading that.
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🙂
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Awesome! Loved the last three lines 🙂
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Thanks , Vandana.
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You are welcome my dear 🙂
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😊😘
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My wonderful Yassy, this reads to me like a beautiful story of survival, and triumph. A life first endured now conquered. I could be wrong though :):) Either way it is outstanding
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You are right, Maggi. Now that is so insightful of you. You are very perceptive my dear. Thank you sweetheart, my dear girl.
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It is always my pleasure. You make me happy :):) it’s not just the nurturing words you write in your poems 🙂 it’s you 🙂 I was just reading Suspended Lines, and it inspired a poem but yours is waaaaaaay better thin mine hahaha. Much love Yassy 🙂 big hugs 🙂
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Ooh. I am going to rush off to read your work. And yes, you make me sooooooo happeeeee, you have no idea.
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I didn’t post it. It’s sitting on my desk, on paper where I wrote it. It was fun to do. I read yours, it stirred words. I figured out what the structure of the poem was, then wrote mine…THEN I saw nonette at the bottom LOL, if I had seen that first I could have googled it and it tell me the syllables per line 🙂 I enjoyed it thats the important thing. It made me happy to write it :):):)
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Can’t wait to read it. Must be as beautiful as you.
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haha, right now I’m probably looking rough. It has been one of those days, and I’ve been cleaning while sorting the adventures. I might look like a mad scientist at the moment :):)
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Mad scientist omg. You are a genius my Margereinstien.
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hahaha :):)
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😂😎😜
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The poetess radiates likes a Phoenix! 🔥💥🔥💥✨✨
Really loved
‘I endeavor to
make touch the fire
that spirits my sovereignty
Epiphanies echo my
Agitated soul’
🙏🏽👽🙌🏽
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Aw! Thank you so much , Sherif. So nice of you my friend. I so appreciate you reading my work and your awesome feedback. Thank you.
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My pleasure 🙂
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😊🙋🏻🙂
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This dramatic monologue is a new format for me, Yassy. You have done it very well and I enjoyed this poem.
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Thank you 😊, Robbie. Always happy when you appreciate.
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Such sadness in those lines.. Like a ransom—defences..?… Whimsical Prophecies.. No one believed you..right..Hmm.. But at least you achieve harmony with those words, I burn gold.. So many questions..??
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Hahahahaha! I just feel in a funny mood now. lol. Don’t mind me , I was talking to another blogger and she brought smiles.
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OK I won’t spoil your mood.. But you have a gift.. Calliope.. No, sorry it’s a natural talent.. A talent that you worked hard on.. Your words reveals an extraordinary tale..
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No, it’s okay.i am good. Everyone does something they like best , I like music but I can’t write music but atleast I can write the lyrics , so life is all about doing and fitting in !got to work on that.
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And what’s your advice for those who don’t fit anywhere?
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Don’t bother. It’s your life. You make yourself happy first.
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Calliope, you don’t like observing do you? You like to be lost in your thoughts.. You think.. A thinker..
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Am more of a dreamer, I think with my heart , make decisions with my mind. Sorry , why but I don’t take too deep observations. I take everything at face value. I trust.
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Hmm.. That’s what I thought.. Sadly, I am an observer… So people and thoughts just drift by.. Dreamer is a thinker with aspirations.. And a will.. They also become achievers..
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I hope so.
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Fantastic
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Thank you.
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Superb!
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Thank you , K !
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Thank you , Davy. This is awesomeness!
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Wow! Wonderful
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Thanks 🙏🏼
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Wow. Just wow!
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Thank you.
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Very nice! So True!
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Thank you 😊
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Yassy, you are most becoming
in golden poetry, and covered
in pixie dust 😎
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Thank you my aurum friend 🌼
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Hello from Dubai .New to your blog, and I can already see what an amazing content you’ve got with all these wonderful poems🙂 . I just hit follow!
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Hello from Mumbai Ahlan wahsahlan
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Stumbled upon this. Every drama in this piece emits POWER. Love this one!
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Thanks ☺️
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