Carrying blossoms scent On wet arms A moist current Bedewing floral brooks Gurgling, gushing acqua An ambrosial shower Deliquescing, delighting senses A redolent zephyr Rubbing tree tops Curling wrinkled leaves Wafting through chimneys Carrying savory odors Tingling, reawakening yearnings Drenching and enveloping Charging the atmosphere With sparkling, virgin crystals Dewy and dancing gleefully Carried by the breeze Tumbling through shrubbery Cascading through soil As water swishes A cooling mist rises Enfolding the landscape In a glistening mantle Of gleaming greenery.
Oh my so much beauty in your words 🙂 Thank you 🙂
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Thank you, Margy.
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My pleasure Yassy 🙂
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Am happy when you are dear girl.
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Incredible imagery. Every line is an exhalation of beauty. ❤️😘🌹
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Thank you, my twin Soul. ❤️❤️❤️❤️
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I’m marveling at your present participles, especially bedewing and deliquescing. This poem really charges forward, captivating and exhilarating me. I like it a lot.
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Thank you so much , Harry.
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Amazing! Really wonderful.
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Thank you, Nic.
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Nice ❤ ❤ ❤
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Thank you.
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Comment my photo too!!! Kisses ❤ ❤ ❤
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I did.
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Such a serine set of sentences
So refreshing, reading this was breath taking as I felt I was being taken on a journey. Lovely composition of words Yassy! 🌹🌹🌹
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Thanks, Jokersy
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💞💞. Of course
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🉐🈹㊙️🈲
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🃏🔥🃏😁
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👶
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🙈
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💩
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Hahaha! Cute, I’m number 2!! You’re number 1😁
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You top the list of my friends , my good friend Jo.
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There is no one who sits atop of anyone’s list more than you Yassy. If I am a good friend, then you are a better one.
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That is so sweet of you , Jo. God bless you , my forever friend for forever.
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And ever. 😁🃏🃏
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🙋🏻🙂
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🙋🏽♂️😁
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Wow!
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Thank you.
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I keep hearing a “redolant zipper” everytime I read “redolant zephyr.” I think I might actual use that for a humorous poem. But I find this one very refreshing.
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Ha ha redolent zipper!
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I love this ending, Yassy “Enfolding the landscape
In a glistening mantle
Of gleaming greenery”. To beautiful!
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It’s raining here, Robbie. So that brought it on. So happy you enjoyed this.
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Although you describe the tears of skies.. Although you describe the love in between, the motion of falling and being embraced.. Although you describe the joy of the land and the surroundings as it welcomes the rain.. You also describe silently that it is not cheering you up… Hmm.. An observation of outside with stillness inside.. You really spill your emotions.. At least that is what I feel.. I could be wrong..
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It’s raining inside of me. That is all I can say.
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Yes, but that is different from the scenery you created.. For a minute if I just read the lines Deliquescing–odors.. It creates a vivid imagery of personal moments if the last part is removed than it’s bare for the world of what you are feeling.. I don’t want to say.. But let me ask indirectly, why the silent grizzle?
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You get inside my mind.
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Oh yassy,,so much beauty in your words here..
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Thank you Michnavs. Hope you are having a relaxed Sunday.
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I am yassy…hope you too is well…☺☺
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Yeah , thanks. 😊
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This is beautiful description filled with wonderful alliteration and assonance. Oh, how the senses spring to life while reading this. It’s like coming of age all over again. Romantic, sensual and delectable writing, dear poet. I believe this to be one of my all time favourites 🙂
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Thank you thank you thank you 😊😊😊
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You are welcome, cubed 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Lol 😂 haha not square root
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lol, just wanted to at least match your mathematical thank yous 🙂
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My maths is atrocious lol
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lol
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😎
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the best 1
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Thanks
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Interesting poem.Well Done.
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Thank you so much, Crystal.
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Your Welcome
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Oh my life! I love your writing
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Oh ! Thank you 😊, so much much , for the life of me, I don’t know what to address you! You have to help me on that. 😂
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My name is Rena. Haha. My wordpress isn’t attached to my actual name I guess. I am a poet, and I recently started a blog. I’m really new to the bloggin scene. I’ve found other poetry on here that I like, but yours is the first blog I’ve found so far that seeems to enrapture me in every post. You take me to the zone. It’s beautiful, hungry, deep. I resonate.
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Hello , Rena. Good to connect with you here. Thank you so much ! I will read your stuff too.
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Perfection! Please do check out my blog as well. I would love your feedback.
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Thank you. I will.
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