my quill spells my soul sensations of the spirit that which makes me whole my ink trails a rendezvous a pursuit of paradise.. i venture deeper embracing my emotions seeking language resolving my lust for writing my soul's sojourn into me... #tanka
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Beautifully penned, stay blessed and have a great day. 😉👍
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Thank you , Ajibola. You have a wonderful weekend, my friend.
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I like this poem, Yassy. A reflection of a writer’s soul.
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Thank you, Robbie. Have a wonderful weekend!
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You too, dear Yassy.
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🤗😊
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Beautiful Yassie!!
Too funny, I had started writing a poem and the second line was I dip my quill into the eddies of my soul ❤️ Haven’t finished it, you’ve gotten it better anyway 😘
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Can’t wait to read yours. We are kindred spirits. We think alike. My sister in arms.
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❤️ I’ll try to get it done today for you
I love this so much. Your tankas are always so powerful
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Aw. Love you 😘
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Love you too!!!
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😊😘❤️🤗
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each day: that (seemingly) unceasing pursuit of paradise of the writer
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Yes, so insightful of you.
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just riffing on your inspired words 😉
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Thanks 😊
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…and the stokes of your ink are spellbinding, and as you write each line of poetry, more of who you are is spelled. This has to be one of the most eloquent pieces about the writing journey that I have ever read. Oh, to be able to sit at the highest point in your mind and watch the flood of emotions and thoughts as that soul sojourns to your deepest places. I love the title, the play on spell and the trail of words that leave me wanting more. Simply awesome, Yassy!!
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Thank you very much my dear Al Pacino. Means a lot to me. Your appreciation is heartwarming! I respect your verdict. Am humbled and 😲 I can’t help feeling elated.
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You are most welcome, my Yassyermaid. I really do love your poetry and am always inspired to write after reading a piece you have written. All I ever do is share how your work makes me feel. Thank you for always sharing.
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Well, likewise. You took the words right out of my mouth, Al Pacino. Your Yassyermaid signs off here. Oh! This name is mind blowing. 😊😂👍🙋🏻
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Good night, my friend 💤
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Not yet lol. It’s only pushing ten pm. Haha 😂
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Ah, right.
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Yeah. I may crash after one ☝️
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A writer’s heart and soul…that’ what i found in this poem..beautiful yassy
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Thank you so much , Michnavs! You have yourself a wonderful and gorgeous weekend, my dear friend.
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I like what your quill has spelt here. Simply outstanding Yassy ❤ !
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Thank you , Radha 😘😊❤️🤗
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Love this yassy, and that last line. It’s like the poet looking at their own reflection.
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Thank you 😊 my dear Basho! Your feedback is so awesome.
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No thank you yassy. Your poetry brightens up each day. Have a great weekend 🙂
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You have a wonderful weekend, Davy. 😊
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Thank you 🙂
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Welcome!
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Beautiful, heartfelt poem Jasmine.
Have a nice weekend.
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Hmm.. The writing.. The last two lines of the 1st are too revealing.. I didn’t know that you started writing so early in life.. The last 2 lines give away the importance, the writing reveals the ka.. Again this is what i feel I could be wrong..
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Yes, I started writing early , but what is ka?
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Ancient Egyptian believed ka to be spirit dwelling as a vital force.. In a person..
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Interesting.
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Unlike the English language.. Spirit, ka is the vital essence, one which protected the divine spirit of the person Bâ is something that makes the individual unique.. So you must have a plethora of material. Hmm.. You were a natural one.. Weren’t you?
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This is so exotic.
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Your writing is Bâ..
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I Love how you express your heart.
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Thank you 😊
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This is a beautiful poem!
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Thank you , Leigha.
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You’re welcome.
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Woww💓
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Thank you , Noor.
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💓
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Nice..great expression
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Thank you.
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great one
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Love it. 💙
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Thank you.
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