Great to see the power of individuality. Hmm.. The idea of control.. I pluck them..and wear them.. The ‘created’ destiny.. In my eyes.. And you provide a subtle hint of I the metaphysical.. By using you.. So simple yet so complex.. Only you can deliver evoke such imagery.. But again this is what I think
It’s all in my head , Zeus. I just get them together.
Lol, only it’s monsoon time here and the sky is liquid , no stars. You got this one right. You think right. Always.
This is the most beautiful thing I have read today and it’s certainly going to stay with me for long ! I can only thank you for sharing this lovely piece of poetry, Yassy. 😊
I intend to discuss this when the idea comes up between myself and the one I love. It’s probably my favorite on your page that I’ve read. Lovely response to an age old idea.
yaskhan 
You’re writings are lovely!
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Your*
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Yeah. I got that.
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Thank you 😊
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This is really sweet! I love the sentiment, and the fact that it’s short. Makes it more expressive.
Kathrin — http://mycupofenglishtea.wordpress.com
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Thank you 😊 , Kathy. Will check your blog soon.
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Cool!
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Thanks.
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This is such a sweet poem. Loved it. 🙂
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Thank you, Edwin. 😊🙂
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Welcome 😊😊
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😊
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Now that is love between two people…..they are ray in each other’s sunshine.
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Lol
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😁
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😎
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🙂
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Lovely lines yassy
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Thanks 🙏🏼
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An endless stream of stars creating more stars in more eyes. Very beautiful Yassy!
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Aw! What a beautiful thought , Sherif ! Thank you.
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Beautifuls thoughts from beautiful poems 😉 You’re most welcome Yassy!
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That is so nice of you, Sherif. Take care , my friend. Ciao.
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Great to see the power of individuality. Hmm.. The idea of control.. I pluck them..and wear them.. The ‘created’ destiny.. In my eyes.. And you provide a subtle hint of I the metaphysical.. By using you.. So simple yet so complex.. Only you can deliver evoke such imagery.. But again this is what I think
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It’s all in my head , Zeus. I just get them together.
Lol, only it’s monsoon time here and the sky is liquid , no stars. You got this one right. You think right. Always.
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Sorry, I replied on my own comment.. My mistake..
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It’s alright.
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Hmm.. I have said in the past Calliope and I will say it again, I only reveal the picture that you paint..Your ascendancy.. Is unparalleled..
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It’s good to read an intellectual verdict on my work.
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Hmm.. I am anything, but one. But Keep writing and let me visit these sacred shores..
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Zeus , wise one. Am honored.
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This is a beautiful piece.
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What a lovely thought, Yassy.
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Yeah. Thank you 😊
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This is the most beautiful thing I have read today and it’s certainly going to stay with me for long ! I can only thank you for sharing this lovely piece of poetry, Yassy. 😊
Much love !
💓💓💓
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Well, thank you , Chhaya, I have missed talking to you.
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Yes indeed, it’s been long we heard from each other, Yassy. Hope you’ve been well. 😊
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I am okay. Hope you are good.
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Great to know ! I am good, Yassy. Thanks ! 😊
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😊😊😘
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😘💝😘
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😘❤️😊
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Oh my Yassy, this is so loving 🙂 Dear one, you are an artist of words 🙂
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Thank you, Maggy. Always happy to see you here. 😘😘😘 a sense of comfort when you are around. That’s what friends are ! Glad to have you.
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😘😘😘😘😘😘
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❤️❤️
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So descriptive and I picture this in my head happening. Another of my favorite poems of yours. 🙂
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So lovely Yas. ❤
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Thank you , Carter. 🙂
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I intend to discuss this when the idea comes up between myself and the one I love. It’s probably my favorite on your page that I’ve read. Lovely response to an age old idea.
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Good luck.
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Probably my favorite on your page. Lovely response to an age old idea.
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😊 thank you.
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Hey yassy, thanks for checking out my writing blog!! I’m really into this poem 🙂
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yes i usher them in. you wear them like jewels. thank you for noticing.
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You are so sweet.
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Again, dear Yassy, a wonderful wonderful song that makes souls shine …like stars ❤
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Thank you my dear friend. ❤️❤️😘😘
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Welcome ❤ ❤
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Oh my, what an image you have created here, Yassy. This is sigh and swoon worthy poetry, my friend.
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Thank you , Al Pacino.
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Most welcome, Yassy-mermaid 🙂
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Hahahahaha I am happy , no one called me that. How sweet, Al Pacino.
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Honey sweet, not the refined kind 🙂
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Yes,😊
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So cool
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Thank you 😊
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you give me some light, when the night becomes darkest, showing me the way
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You light up my life, brightening the darkness , lighting up
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Wonderful words and poetry yassy.
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Thank you. , Davy.
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Simple and lovely
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Thank you.
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The stars in your eyes
They illuminate my mind
Like your words, torchlights
So bright yet do not blind
Write on Precious Lady
Write on.
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Love this
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Thank you.
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NIiiiiiiiiice!
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