I think its more than that. Its like sort of detachment.. Like a clear mind knowing that alienation.. But accepting it.. Something not manifested but born with.. Something natural.. But again this is what i think, and I could be wrong..
No, its clearly written by you.. I read what you reveal.. I do hope that you will find the land where you can plant your feet and can call home.. (Also i hope people can read you more clearly both personally and digitally)..
Nobody has told me this clearly before what I have striven to put on paper. I really slave over what I write. It’s satisfying. I don’t know about people reading me more clearly. Hope.
I want to tell you , I just checked my stats and I see the number of views are more than the number of likes. Why ? I think people don’t like me ha ha ha ha , did I say something wrong, Apollo? You seem to know all the answers.
Views are different. Your own viewing of a post is registered as a view Calliope.. And if someone is accessing your site from home page.. Irrespective of whether he clicked any posts or not.. All the post on the home page will be registered as a view in stats.. Don’t worry..
I know.. Your only solace, obsession, desire.. Your only home in this whole wide world.. Are the words you express in your poetry.. Poetry is you.. And your poems and your expressions are inseparable…
Love the colors of lilac and I love the colour of your beautiful soul , Lulia. Thank you dear friend for being here. Have a safe and happy weekend. ❤️❤️❤️
yaskhan 
Beautiful
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Thank you. 😊
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Anytime 😃
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Breathtaking poetry, Yassy. Your words stimulate the senses.
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Thank you very much. I so appreciate. Coming from somebody who writes awesome poetry.
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Awww, you are most welcome, Yassy. I love your poetry.
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Thank you again.
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Most welcome!
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“under a broken sky…” brilliant imagery, Yassy.
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Thank you, Robbie. It’s raining here. Have a safe and peaceful weekend !
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❤ :*
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Ah. Hi Gorgeous.
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Hello hello beautiful one!! ❤ I'm always lurking hehe
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Yeah yippeeee so glad to see you. Yahoooo
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I too love walking in the the rain, for real, in a barrack stretching to the horizon . Nice. ☺️☺️☺️
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Water water water lol but it’s fun as you say , thank you.
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Do you feel like an alien out there? I think you do, again this is how i feel.. Reading this Senryu..
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Subconsciously, I think I do. I would like to be some place else. It will happen.
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I think its more than that. Its like sort of detachment.. Like a clear mind knowing that alienation.. But accepting it.. Something not manifested but born with.. Something natural.. But again this is what i think, and I could be wrong..
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Lol it’s weird , can you read people ‘s minds. You seem to sense a lot that is left unsaid.
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No, its clearly written by you.. I read what you reveal.. I do hope that you will find the land where you can plant your feet and can call home.. (Also i hope people can read you more clearly both personally and digitally)..
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Nobody has told me this clearly before what I have striven to put on paper. I really slave over what I write. It’s satisfying. I don’t know about people reading me more clearly. Hope.
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I read you and i listen to you.. You paint a picture so vivid that i feel sorry for anyone not visiting your shores..
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You are intuitive, have you studied psychology?
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No. But i can observe. At least i think i can…. But I could be wrong..
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You observe well. Your mind is sharp. Perceptive.
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I want to tell you , I just checked my stats and I see the number of views are more than the number of likes. Why ? I think people don’t like me ha ha ha ha , did I say something wrong, Apollo? You seem to know all the answers.
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Views are different. Your own viewing of a post is registered as a view Calliope.. And if someone is accessing your site from home page.. Irrespective of whether he clicked any posts or not.. All the post on the home page will be registered as a view in stats.. Don’t worry..
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I am still feeling my way around here. Thanks anyway. I don’t obsess over views and all that. You know that.
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I know.. Your only solace, obsession, desire.. Your only home in this whole wide world.. Are the words you express in your poetry.. Poetry is you.. And your poems and your expressions are inseparable…
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Tu entiendes tan bien, mi amigo.
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Espero que así Calliope.
Adiós
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tú lo haces, Apollo. adios.
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Nicely written. Loved that imagery ❤
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Thank you, Edwin Ronald Lambert. Much appreciated!
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Always welcome 🙂
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😊
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🙂
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Really wonderful!
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Nice!!!
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Thankx.
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I want to
walk into native rain
under a broken sky….
:):) so, I closed my eyes, and did 🙂 Thank you Yassirita 🙂
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Aw 😘😊Margarita.
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🙂
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Breath-taking and visually captivating.
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Thank you Charlie
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You welcome. 🙂
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Charlie , your nin, why can’t I like it or comment on it
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I had to update it. So, now your free to comment it and like it. Try it now. 🙂 Let me know.
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Yeah
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It works now?
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I got that .
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Beautiful poem; and the vivid description simply breathtaking
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Thank you , Masuudabdi.
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Welcome
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Beautiful☺️
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Thank you , Sonia.
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Breathtaking yassy. A wonderful haiku.
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Thank you, Davy. What you wrote today was fabulous.
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I appreciate that yassy. Thank you 🙂
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Always welcome, my friend. 😊
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May I put it up as a collaboration? P L E A S E !
white breath of lilac . white lilac blooms
I walk into native rain . dancing on my naked skin
under a broken sky . sunbeams escaping
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Of course.
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Thank you most kindly, your thoughts?
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👍👍👍👍👍
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💐 🌷 🌹 🥀 🌻 🌼 🌸 🌺
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🍫🎂🍿🍧🍩🍪🍹
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🙂
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More, more 🙂
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🍨🍚🍜🍱🍣🥘
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LOL
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Epic.
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This is exquisite! Few tiny words have the power to upturn a soul! ❤ I love lilacs so my soul is violet-happy! Thank you, dear Yassy ❤
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Love the colors of lilac and I love the colour of your beautiful soul , Lulia. Thank you dear friend for being here. Have a safe and happy weekend. ❤️❤️❤️
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Thank you and you are most welcome ❤ ❤ ❤ Have a merry weekend!
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😘😘😊❤️
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🙂 🙂 3
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Simply gorgeous haiku!
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Thank you 😊
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Gorgeous! Every time you surprise me with even more talent! Come check out my blog-I love poetry.😊😊
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Will check your work. 🤗🤗
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