Desert, desert swirling sands In the silence, of no sounds Desolation of nature Cactus, lone standing feature. Seeing redness of the skies Armadillo lizard sighs The cactus wren sings a tune Thorny devil is immune. Jumping Chola gives delight Desert flora, stunning sight Desert,no barren land, ground Exotic species abound. Desert holds an oasis Giving life chance of success Crystal clear water of spring Quenching of thirst, it does bring.
This excellent poem creates some very vivid imagery yassy.
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Oh! Thank you good man πyou are kind to read my work and comment. Thank you, Davy.
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Always a pleasure and inspiration yassy.
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I am blessed. π
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I need a camel to take me across the desert you describe, Lady Yasmin
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I can well visualize you, Lord Zoolon.
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You make the desert look such desirable place to be in π
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It is a mysterious place. Have you been to Rajasthan ?
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No. It’s on my bucket list!
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Great.
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Wow, very well composed that now I wish to have a desert-ed vacationππ
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Thank you, it’s fun in the desert.
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Oh..But I never visited..wish to go now.
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Happy vacation, whenever you go.
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This is an excellent poem.
And the images are vivid…
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Thank you, Michnavs.
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Wonderful picture of the desert actually being so*** full of life.
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Yes, so right. Lol. Life in the empty quarter.
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Which desert were you in?
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Lol , none! π³π€π
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Ah, I was wondering about having the armadillo in the same place as the cactus wren and cholla.
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My imagination runs away with me. And I am left with but poetry.
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Wonderful poem, Yassy. I feel like a learned a whole lot of information about a desert from this.
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Thank you, Robbie. The desert is a whole new world.
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A truly delightful read. Of only we could be as resilient as the desert. Love the way you describe the vibrancy of life in an otherwise seemingly barren environment.
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Glad you liked , thank you , Percadbury !
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π€ you are most welcome. I love it – Percadbury!
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With friends , I do that. I have to play with words.
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You are a master player of words and I am humbled to be on the friend list
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You are too generous!
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Perhaps too honest!
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Honesty is good.
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Yes, it is!
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Perchocolaty!
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π I will soon have to rename myself Yassytabulous π
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Hahahahaha
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Hi, Yassyriffic!! π
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Omg that’s a good one , percolatingpoeterrific
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π π Thanks!!! I am trying to keep up with the master of words!!
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Excellent job capturing the beauty of the desert Yassy!
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Thank you, Sherif.
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Finally! I got to sit down and read your poem :):) dare I say breathtaking!!!!! Captivating, a true delight to be able soak this in.
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You say the most beautiful things. I feel blessed.
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I agree with all that’s been said, but for me your poem evoked many memories of 2, 4 week tours of the
Cyrenaica desert, Libya, 1963, and again in 1965. Will leave you a pingback.
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Omg really.
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Really, and thinking back I was out there in 1962 for 4 weeks, that being my introduction to the desert, it was the first, and only time I collapsed with heat stroke. Going back to the soldier, yes it was very sad, but how foolish of him.
If you click the link again, and then click the back link, which will take you to the book of remembrance. you will find another sad memory of mine, Sid Scott, who was an acquaintance mine, along with a friend of his, died as the result of a car accident, I was one of the pallbearers of Sid, from the make do hearse to his grave. My saddest memory from that time was leaving Malta, knowing that I might never return, and I never did π¦ I hast to add that the 2 and half years I spent in Malta were some of the happiest times of my life.
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I will check them, Precious. You take care.
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You take care too!
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Wonderful
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So basically Southwest US, Australia, South Africa and maybe a hint of Central Mexico.. You are a person without borders… Keep travelling…
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My mind is free. To explore.
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But you are a traveller. Right? Someone who love to transcend borders, both physically and mentally..
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Nah, I don’t even think about borders.
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Well, Calliope, you can do that, but we mortals can’t.. We are restricted.. restrained, and sometimes reserved in our attitudes..
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Why reserved ?
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Well, reserved as in slow.. I already made that clear when you asked me about my real name.. I thought you could tell i have a reserved personality.. I can express only behind a mask.. I am.. Unlike you.. A coward..
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Don’t call yourself a coward. Please.
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What good are words.. If you can’t express them..?
What good are memories.. If you can’t face them..?
What good are thoughts.. If you can’t release them..?
What good is this life..?
What good is my life..?
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Listen, nobody’s life is good, there is always something that is sad , but life has to go on. Life is a gift from god. Your life has a reason, you have to go on ! You made me cry.
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I am sorry to do that Calliope.. If we ever meet.. You will realise why I said that.. Here I can release myself.. My tongue and mind betray me in real life.. It is strange.. What a veil can do?
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I cannot bear it that anyone be sad. Anyways it’s good to talk with you. You are a good person, that is how I feel.
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Your poems express sadness.. You yourself bear scars.. You bare it all to see.. But you are concerned about others,Calliope.. You are a saint.. And you see good in everyone.. I bid adieu..
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Au revoir. Be well.
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I feel like I have made my first visit to a desert… wonderfully vivid!
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Aw! Thanks so much, Leigha.
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You’re welcome.
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Great way of seeing the positives in the desolate dryness of the desert! Through your writing I am tempted to go to a desert and find an oasis! π
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There is so much good in the natural habitat, the desert abounds with exotic species .
I am sure you will find your oasis.
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What a great poetry work and I love it. Some people don’t really know there’s no much difference between a desert to a beach.
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There is life everywhere.
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Most definitely π
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Thank you, Aji!
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You’re most welcome Yassy ππ
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Fantastic poem. I understand what you are saying. Thank you!
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I thank you π too.
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