That’s why they dance and intertwine with one another. And then to be given a story from someone like you…..they now have a colorful purpose, no longer that of which is black and white. Beauty Yassy.
i flirt as i gaze
your words transfix my thoughts
we breath together
~
across space… time heals
loneliness… flirting with words
a poets privilege
~
to share the moon…
sat looking together
dreams permitting
~
i flirt in fun…
or do i wish for more
brain… stopped… joking
~
to flirt
with words…
alone
Thanks my muse, again you have me inspired, forever on my shoulder.
As Harry said ‘Breathe’ gives it a divine meaning.
I like such poems in which changing a few words change the demeanour of the whole literary expression.
Like I could change your your expression with :-
Silhouette appear across
Moonlit dreams…
I breathe life in
A forgotten memory…
I wonder if I would have found your Haiku if you haven’t read my Annoyed Haiku post. So all thanks to you.
P. S. I really thought no one will understand my post let alone like it.
Reblogged this on richwrapper and commented:
I laugh so glad at this
you conjure each wordlet
into galaxies
and I just laugh
with the mind
who makes
joy!
Ooops: first tine was supposed to count to seven sillybles: so I suggest: “L must laugh so glat at this.” But in my copy on Richwrapper – properly reported as “stolen” from your site – both ways. ‘Scuse: now I go scribe the above sending.
Love this!
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Thank you , Knutson.
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Lovely!
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Thankx , Carter.
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That’s why they dance and intertwine with one another. And then to be given a story from someone like you…..they now have a colorful purpose, no longer that of which is black and white. Beauty Yassy.
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That is poetic, what you write.
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Everything you say is poetic😁🌹
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That is my forte 😂😎
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Yes it is. 🙂😁
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A lovely haiku, Yassy.
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Thank you, Robbie.
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Wonderful indeed.
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Thank you , Nic !
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Like a lovely dance 🙂
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Thankx ,😊
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You are always welcome 🙂
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😊🙂
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i flirt as i gaze
your words transfix my thoughts
we breath together
~
across space… time heals
loneliness… flirting with words
a poets privilege
~
to share the moon…
sat looking together
dreams permitting
~
i flirt in fun…
or do i wish for more
brain… stopped… joking
~
to flirt
with words…
alone
Thanks my muse, again you have me inspired, forever on my shoulder.
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Mick, you outdone yourself this time.
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my muse
you are my inspiration
your talent
will always inspire mine
write on precious Lady
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You are a good man, my friend. Thank you 😊
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Thank you, Mick.
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what can I write
poetry my plight
your welcome
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My plight is poetry too.
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Another wonderful haiku from you yassy. It has me thinking of the other poem in the space between breaths.
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Thank you, Davy! It’s kind of you.
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‘Breathe’ is a great verb to describe how poetry is created. I really like your work.
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Many thanks !
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As Harry said ‘Breathe’ gives it a divine meaning.
I like such poems in which changing a few words change the demeanour of the whole literary expression.
Like I could change your your expression with :-
Silhouette appear across
Moonlit dreams…
I breathe life in
A forgotten memory…
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Great. Thank you.
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I wonder if I would have found your Haiku if you haven’t read my Annoyed Haiku post. So all thanks to you.
P. S. I really thought no one will understand my post let alone like it.
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Keep writing.
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I like this kind of flirting 🙂
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Lol😎
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Mera latest padha?
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Nahee! I will.
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Beautiful!
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Thank you , N. missed you.
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Nice poem
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Thank you , Daisy.
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Your Welcome
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I needed this and needed to read something to bring a smile to my face and it did.
Yassy…I love you and you are awesome!
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Thank you , Charlie.
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You welcome Yassy.
I’m back! and I posted a new poetic discussion. 🙂
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Yeah.
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Reblogged this on Orthometry.
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Reblogged this on richwrapper and commented:
I laugh so glad at this
you conjure each wordlet
into galaxies
and I just laugh
with the mind
who makes
joy!
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That is a great poem in your comment.
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Done on the fly: I may have to copy it and repost on richwrapper. I am so happy you approve.
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It’s fabulous. You are a magician with words. Word magic man !
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Ooops: first tine was supposed to count to seven sillybles: so I suggest: “L must laugh so glat at this.” But in my copy on Richwrapper – properly reported as “stolen” from your site – both ways. ‘Scuse: now I go scribe the above sending.
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Yeah. Okay.
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Very nice poem!
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Thank you , Luisa.
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You have such a unique way of breathing together poetry and the opening personification is just superb.
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Thank you , Perc. I love words.
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You are welcome, Yassy. I can tell!
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😊🙂
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🙂
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So affecting in so few words…
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Thank you.
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