yassy in Poetry May 22, 2017May 22, 2017 16 Words time travel time travel on the runway--- the moon remains with me throughout my journey #haiku#senryu ShareTwitterLike Loading...
Your poem creates such vivid imagery yassy. There is a whole novel inside it. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
I wrote it the way I felt it. I am glad you feel it that way. Thanks , D! LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Lovely Yassy. It is so comforting that the moon is the same where ever you travel too. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
time and tide move on the moon it wax and wains her face tis the way for all, the runway of life encompasses our planet our moon a guide know the moon… reach out grasp its light… fly until dawn share it with the sun moonlight a lovers world euphoric a moonlit walk moon cast shadows lead the way till dawn you follow your words… inspire so distant yet moon lit silver hiding gold you are my muse please recognise my plight these words i write… yours LikeLiked by 2 people Reply
The vividness in your poetry really sings the beautiful tones your create. π LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Your poem creates such vivid imagery yassy. There is a whole novel inside it.
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I wrote it the way I felt it. I am glad you feel it that way. Thanks , D!
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I agree with this guy π
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Oh Thankx Venessa, hope you are keeping well.
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You are very welcome! I’m not too bad, thanks β€
How are you?
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Am glad you are fine! I am good, thank you.
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xo
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‘From here to Eternity’ – a gripping image, Yassy.
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Thank you so much , Roland!
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Lovely, Ms Y!
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Thank you ,Sir K !
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Great poem, simple yet full of imagery/memories.
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Thank you, Michael.
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Even the mind
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beautiful
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Lovely Yassy. It is so comforting that the moon is the same where ever you travel too.
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Yes, isn’t it ? You said it beautifully!
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A model poem.
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Modelled after Jo!
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What a sweetie that Yassy.
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Yahoo!!! ;oD
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time and tide move on
the moon it wax and wains her face
tis the way for all,
the runway of life
encompasses our planet
our moon a guide
know the moon… reach out
grasp its light… fly until dawn
share it with the sun
moonlight
a lovers world
euphoric
a moonlit walk
moon cast shadows lead the way
till dawn you follow
your words… inspire
so distant yet moon lit
silver hiding gold
you are my muse
please recognise my plight
these words i write… yours
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Wonderful verse ! Leaves me spellbound.
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Bless you!
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Bless you too, good night sweetness!
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The vividness in your poetry really sings the beautiful tones your create. π
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Thank you , Charles! Hope you are well.
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Great one! Somehow motivating to me.
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Thank you , I am so glad.
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