the beauitful night sky
millions of twinkling stars
little tufts of grey clouds
wafting across the crescent
far away, I see a shooting star
I forget to make a wish..
the glory of
the magnificent expanse
keeps me spellbound
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the beauitful night sky
millions of twinkling stars
little tufts of grey clouds
wafting across the crescent
far away, I see a shooting star
I forget to make a wish..
the glory of
the magnificent expanse
keeps me spellbound
Woww
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Beautiful!
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Thank you, Vandana.
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Love this! Enjoy the moment and don’t ruin it wishing for something else in its place. Stay spellbound π
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You are right, Sheriff. πThank you.
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Haha it came from your writing!! Thank you for your wonderful poetry!
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You are welcome, thank you for your wonderful comments, sheriff. Have a nice week.
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The magical night sky makes us forget everything. Beautiful imagery Yasmin π
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Thankx , so happy you liked it.
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This is simply beautiful! I love it how you forgot to make a wish… π
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Thank you π very much.
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I know if i could see your eyes
I’d see shooting stars so bright
A wish I’d make for your delight
Your every day a best surprise
Such is life, your so far away,
But look, a star, your eyes.
Yours, and cant be disguised.
Momentary, they can not stay.
Reflections, oops! one winked,
Then both, gone, seeking wonders.
Shooting stars, silent thunderers!
Goodnight, see you later, blinked.
πΎ π π· πΉ π₯ π» πΌ πΈ πΊ everyone a thank you!
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I am so overwhelmed, I am sf ding you hugs. π€π€π€π€
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Some big gentle HUGS for you…βΊ
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Aw. You are the kindest sweetest of them all.
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Hope all is well with you , Precious.
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All is well, Aileen cross with me for the blitz, but she knows that I am only thinking of her suffering. :0)
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I don’t know anything , Mick. I only don’t want her to smoke. Period
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I can just see that shooting star in all its magnificence, Yassy
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Have you seen a shooting star in recent days, Robbie?
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I saw shooting stars on TV. There were recently shooting stars visible from Cornwall in the UK. See this link if you are interested http://www.cornwalllive.com/shooting-stars-from-halley-s-comet-meteor-shower-expected-to-light-up-the-sky-over-cornwall-tonight/story-30314292-detail/story.html.
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Yes, I will. Thankx.
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You are a star and produce such wonderful creative writing.
You are beautiful my friend. π
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I am blushing. Thank you, Charles.
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π You welcome yassy. π
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Beautiful.
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Thankx !
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One of life’s joys is staring into a clear night sky and you have captured this perfectly in your excellent poem yassy.
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Thank you, Davy. Thankx for reading my work. Always appreciate your comments.
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Niiiiiiiiice! Very nice!
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Thanks K!!!
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I’ve the same trouble with the night sky, falling into it and forgetting. Cool!
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I love looking up at the stars. So fascinating. I forget everything.
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Just like I was there watching it all…. beautiful creation of scene and feeling Yassy!
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Thank you , Leigha
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You’re welcome.
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This is beautiful β€β€
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Thank you sweetie
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Beautiful Poem.
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Thank you, Daisy.
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Your Welcome
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I live out away from cities and town, the sky is always clear here, since it doesn’t get drowned out by the city lights and I stand out on the porch at night and see shooting starts at least once a week. Sometimes they are small and burn out quickly. Other times they are the long lasting, streaking through the sky. It’s always amazing but I always forget to make a wish π
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Well, I live in the city and it’s ages since I saw a shooting star. I am glad atleast i can see the stars and the moon π! What a scene it must be, seeing a star shooting. Wow. Lucky you.
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Sometimes they are quick and short but still always excites me. I don’t know why π
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You know Mag, this little verse was inspired by your comment!
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Really?
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Yup. I will see the stars and think of my dear friend Magg!
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