transcending to evanesce, tantalize bleeding a fervor carrying murmurs of thousand cherished heartstrings to rhapsodize unbidden cadence breaking to behove a ballad that echoes from far embraces quivering a mystical lure thereof. a sun torching viridian skyscape waking cordovan landscape to undrape. #ottava rima
Ooooh, I love your choice of words in this. Very visceral.
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Thank you , Sarah.
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Amazing words well versed. π
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Many thanks girl.
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You are welcome sweetie. π
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yassy these words play like a harp. What a wonderful vision of Summer you have created.
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So happy you like ! Thankx Davy.
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I am really liking how you experiment so well with all of the poetry forms. What would you say your favoirite is?
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Thank you. I think I like couplets.
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I tend to use couplets more than anything else. So, that’s interesting to hear. I even poke fun at myself for it in an earlier poem of mine that I’ll post sometime. I don’t remember my exact words but it has to do with couplets running across my page and setting the stage like star-crossed lovers … I’m sure that it’s not as good as I remember it.. π
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Am I following you? I really don’t know. I will , sometimes I can’t follow , it will be easier to read your work. Lemme check.
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Aww thank you!! Fledgling blogger here. And it’s nice to be followed by someone who thinks and feels on so much. I and we appreciate it!!
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Oh so welcome. Happy blogging. I appreciate you too. Good to connect with like minded peeps
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Now, if only I can learn how to create menus that work and how to put submenus on those. Right now, I kind of feel like I’m splashing my work up against a wall. π
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Just follow your heart and your instincts. ππ
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I followed you ! So will get your stuff on my reader. Viola !
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A very good prose! I love the line”a sun torching viridian skyscape”.
Keep up the good work!
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Thank you , Louis.
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You are welcome!
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Very nice poem, Yassy.
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Thank you my good friend.
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This is outstanding. For some reason it made me think of the most beautiful sunrise but more like just as the suns light is appearing but not quite peaking out. Thank you :):)
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Your kindness is always appreciated. I am so delighted when I read your comments, it feels a sense of belonging. Thank you.
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You know more words than me, Lady Yasmin. Seriously good poem.
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I am thinking of nothing but words all day long. It’s crazy. Thank you , Lord Zoolon of WP.
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I hope all the words you want land in your lap for your next poem.
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It goes around in my head every minute of my waking hour till I put them down on paper.
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You sound like me when I’ve got a melody in my head, Lady Yasmin
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A lovely write… beautiful poem! π
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Many thanks , Iris
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Most welcome, Yassy.
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Hey Yassy!
Just nominated you for βOne Lovely Blogger Awardβ!
Would love to see you participate π
Itβs upto you, after all.
Have a great day!
http://thehonestfabler.com/2017/04/28/one-lovely-blogger-award/
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So sweet of you , Ashu! I appreciate it very much , my friend. Now, I am really feeling under the weather ! Don’t feel up to anything! You really done me a great honor !
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You’re always welcome! ^-^π
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Nice one…
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Thanks ππππ
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Wonderful as always Yass
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Always , a thank you π, from my heart.
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Welcome
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Impressive as seemingly always. π
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Thank you, Michael!π
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Lovely!
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Thank you π
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gorgeous poem and photo .
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Thank you, Francina.
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Reblogged this on Orthometry.
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Thank you, Grant! Hope you are having a nice day.
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You are welcome!
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