Dreaming Of Spring

There was spring in my step as I met with Narcissus!!

#monoku

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      1. Thanks yassy. The 5,7,5 sequence is a modern interpretation. I have seen haiku written in a vertical line. A great form to study and play with 🙂

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      2. 5,7,5 is so inhibiting. If you read the great masters ‘ work , you will understand what I am trying to say. So is senryu. But that is mostly emotional or psychological poetry.

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      3. I have started reading some of it yassy and it is fantastic. I like the 5,7,5 format as it gets a thought down to a seed and then you can expand it back form there. The debate about haiku and senryu is also fascinating.

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      4. Yes. We can go on and on about it. Yes, 5,7,5 gives us a standard format to Work round with. I find haiku fascinating. Looking forward to posts from you. Have a nice day , Davy.

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