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Ignite…..A Than-Bauk

In gold twilight 

candlelight glows

to smite the heart..

In love’s pursuit

to rewrite time

secret tryst brews..

holding dreams tight

to ignite bright

velvet night sky…

Stars radiate 

they glint and blaze

despite the gloam..

Sapphire blue light

on love’s plight shines

enchant love’s ways…

52 thoughts on “Ignite…..A Than-Bauk”

    1. You are so good for my morale, I think it’s your generous heart that comes out with so much warmth. I am truly blessed to have you as my friend. Can’t tell how much it means to me , my dear Pure Soul.

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      1. 🙂 Well, you deserve all the thanks I can give. You have a gift and you share that with us, you don’t have to but you choose to, and when we receive gifts, we should give thanks for them. 🙂

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      2. And you deserve all the thanks I can give for sharing your time , reading my work and always appreciating. Well, I think I found my angel, my fairy. I can picture you with your glowing face and gossamer wings. Ah! WP has an angel fairy. I am going to call you angel fairy. I don’t know why, it seems so right.

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  12. Mmm….. great work, you know you can tell when someone kind writes, you’re so kind to this piece we can all feel it, from the choice of words to the structure. Thanks Yassy I want to say more but… it’s best i don’t… thank you for being kind.

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      1. You’re welcome Yas. Well done for the work done. It came out beautifully. I remember the first one. I really loved it too. I can’t remember it totally but I remember the rhymes were “knight, night and white”.

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