I scatter my tears
Into a cornflower sky
Watch clouds turn carmine and die;
Supress the ache that
Pervades my very essence
As shrapnel silences my defense…
#sedoka
I scatter my tears
Into a cornflower sky
Watch clouds turn carmine and die;
Supress the ache that
Pervades my very essence
As shrapnel silences my defense…
#sedoka
yaskhan 
gorgeous, haunting
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Thank you Christine!
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“Watch clouds turn carmine and die” is a beautiful blending of imagery and sound, dear Poetess. ❤
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Thank you kindly.
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Very unique, Yassy. Well done.
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Thank you Robbie.
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so beautiful and sad all at the same time. Thank you Yassy 🙂
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You are oh so welcome!
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This poem befits the tragic events in Stockholm today.
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It’s a terrible tragedy! God help us all.
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This world has gone pear shaped.
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I am just imagining that. A pear jumps to mind. Sorry. , my bad.
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This hit me hard ! A great piece Yassy.
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Thank you Chhaya.
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My pleasure Yassy ❤
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😘😘
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Reblogged this on Orthometry.
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Thank you Grant.
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You are welcome!
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😊🙋🏻
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Beautiful!
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Many Thankx for the appreciation Roy.
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I cry with you, very apt, so many terrible things happening, all so very sad.
I think you have found a way into my head, for I wrote a tribute poem this morning, (yesterday morning, for me), a concrete one in the shape of a bluebell, my blue sky, only mine fell the clouds followed to, you’ll have to read it I’d love your opinion.
Take care Precious Lady!
Mick
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Yeah Mick ! Passing Kleenex! You can put your head on my shoulder and bawl. Now, without further ado , lemme check your post.
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Seriously though its like WWIII is all ready happening…
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In s sense, it is. Chemical warfare is gruesome. I don’t know what to say. How can man be so cruel ?
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What scares the s**t out of me is if they, whoever, start using biological weapons then were all in the mire.
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Scary thought! Omg 😲 let’s not think about that. Pure annihilation! Almighty God. It’s doomsday!
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Very scary!
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Good will prevail.
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Lets all Pray!
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Yes!
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Amen!
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What is it titled , sweet guy?
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Got it
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❤
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Woah! Wow!
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Beautiful just like you Yassy. ❤️
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Thank you J! How have you been? Long time 🤷♀️
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Good lovely, how have you been? Hope you been well.😁
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Yes! The sun just fell from the sky , YOU WROTE.
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So that means the moon just came up? My animal side is coming around soon. And you?
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Nah, it’s noon here, I was surprised to see your post after a long time. You should write J!!!
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I just did. 😛. I take baby steps Yass. Next will be something more.
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Please do. !!
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I will. I promise. 🙏🏻
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Will be looking out for you
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Oh! Is that a pick up line? 😎
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Looking to read your posts, 😳
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😏. Of course you are. I know that beautiful. 🙂. Wishful thinking.
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Aw. Come on. 😊
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❤️❤️
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🌺🌸🌻🌼💐
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Awwwww, Yassy…….even if I was allergic, I’d take them……which I’m not, so I will. 😁. I give you my heart and you give me flowers. 😁
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I so cherish our friendship!
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I do too. I think it’s beautiful. 🙂!
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Thank you 😊
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Like I say all the time lovely, I should be thanking you. 🙂
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Mutual feelings of friendship and gratitude.
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Thank you❤️. Always cherished.😉
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Always welcome!
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I know lovely. ☺️
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Oh! Is that a pick up line? 😎
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Depends on if it works 😏
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Hmm
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😁❤️. Oh Yassy……
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Beautiful! Desperateness of a tormented soul is portrayed very effectively through appropriate images!
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Thank you Ashokji
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Very nice! I’ve a piece with a line “Death always take great delight in embarrassing me” You say it much better!
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I will read yours. Thank you John.
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A lot of power in only a few words… very well written!
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Many thanks Leigha.
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You’re most welcome!
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[I will start by pointing out a minor flaw. “Suppress” has two p’s not one. Minor.] Very nice, Yassy. So much thought and emotion packed into such a small space. I enjoyed it a lot.
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Thank you, Ed.
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