I struggle to put my words in a line
I gather them and mount them on a shrine..
Words waltz like braille on paper
Recollections are a heartbreaker..
And now I can’t feel my dreams anymore
Inside my heart, avalanche of words galore..
Lost in this world, feeling singled out
I toe the line, no rules I flout..
I hold my breath drowning
Overwhelmed by hostile surroundings..
Memoirs unfold in the depths of my soul
I rely on myself to console..
I am not scared of my demons, I face them
My rimes help, never let me succumb…
As pages turn like accoustics in a band
I hold my lines in the palm of my hand..
#rhyming couplet
It is always beautiful to “travel” on your verse!
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Yes. Thank you.
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Fantastic poetry Yassy….smooth as silk, and so brave !
Love ,
Chhaya
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Thank you Chhaya. !
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Beautiful Yassy! ” Inside my heart avalanche of words galore”…..So much depth in it. I feel that many times within me!
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Wonderful poem Yassy! Loved every word of it.
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Thank you.
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Beautiful and profound.
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Thank you Venessa.
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You’re so inspiring!
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Well. Thxnhx. ππ
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Thiis a nice piece of self-reflection Jasmine.
Have a wonderful weekend. Forrest
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You have a nice weekend ππ
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Beautiful Yassy. Very inspirational, triumphant over the pain π
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Yeah. Thankx. Soul. ππ€
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I’ll start and stop at ‘wow’π
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Oh !
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You seem bit disappointed, my friend. I’m sorry. It’s just that I thought if I start stripping down your poem I will likely end up writing a dissertation on its greatness. And you’ll be tired of meπ
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Nope, nothing like that. πis it N or he? It’s just that I will be travelling soon so a bit preoccupied.
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It’s N, he’s taking a temporary break from the blog. Happy travelling. Be safe.
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Yeah thank you. Not until next week, got some things to wind up.
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Travel safe.
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Thank you C.J,
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Amazing!
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Thank you very much Charvu!!
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Wonderful yassy. The world of the poet in 16 lines π
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Thank you Davy. You are right. Spot on. The poet’s world. π€
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I really enjoyed reading this. The line “And now I canβt feel my dreams anymore” is still bouncing around my brain (in a good way) π
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Thank you Jade !
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You’re most welcome.
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I just loved this poem… wonderful!!!
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Thank you Leigha.
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You’re welcome.
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As my Leprechaun friend would say, “Its a cracker”,
Inside your heart an avalanche of words
Everyone a precious jewel, a part of you
Precious Lady!
Mick
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Thank you my precious friend.
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Your most welcome π π
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Then open handed you give to your readers.
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Yes ! π
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beautiful poem, loved it!
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Thank you.
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Nice poem π
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Thank you, Ethan.
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Can you help me to promote my blog? π
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Of course. Don’t worry. Will get back to you. A little busy now.
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Can you help me to promote my blog? π
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Only too glad to help.
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Yayy. Thank you so much π
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Yoππ»ππ»
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Beautiful!
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Thank you
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Amazing! The last couplet blew me away!!!
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Thank you ππΌ
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