I walk the pathless trail, into a forest abuzz with haiku.
Revelling in the delicious sense of being drawn into a
metaphysical embrace.Scents of pine, cedar, fir brim into the
ambience of gossamer shadows.
liquid melodies
of birds ripple the air:
a squirrel browses
The quiet eloquence of the forest falls ,tuneful murmurs on my ears,
like the breath of eternal spirits roaming infinitesimal spaces,
unwearied, plucking strings in the purled leafage. I muse their whisperings.
aurum light filters:
leaves quiver into
cerulean drippings
I feel a rush of serendipity, entering a divine cosmos where
nourishing and nuturing renews verve. I lean into the wispy
slender branches of the weeping willow and slumber, my shadow
etched in gloam, as incantations of birds fade..I close my eyes.
a drunken bee
faints into my lap:
winter’s exodus
#haiban
Dedicated to my friend Dana, of mahabuttitches17.wordpress.com
who inspired me to write this..
Astoundingly beautiful!
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Thank you very much.
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This was such a rejuvenating read, Yasmin!
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Thank you Vidhu
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Yas…am taking this liberty coz I know you have a sense of humour….but a long time ago my favorite teacher used to call me Vidhu…and I still reserve that for her ๐
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Oh yeah. Okay. No problem my friend. Good night Vidur.
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Hahaha….this is from someone who went his entire school life…. reminding himself – what’s in a name! Hope taken in that sense of humour, Yasmin ๐
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Yes of course. ๐๐๐ป๐no worries at all. Take care.
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Hey Yasmin, I keep coming back to this exchange in my head and for some reason it troubles me….so whether needed or not by you…I apologise for the reaction. It shouldn’t have been so! โบ๏ธ
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It’s okay my dear. It’s cool take care
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At the end of the day, a name means nothing, but people do….so the intent was just a laugh!!!
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lol. I gotcha!!
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Oh Yazzy!!!!!!!!!!!!! I adore this!!!!!!!!!!!! It’s a rainy cloudy day here, but I want nothing more to go play in the forest and feel your words anew!!!! This is like the softest blanket on a perfectly chilly day. When spring is just awakening, and the world is too beautiful for words, and your words captured it! Incredible!!!!!!! I love you so much this is amazing.
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๐ yippee. Yay am happy you liked it. We will go play in the forest one day. With the kids of course , can’t do without them. So much to do. So many dreams. Sigh !!!๐๐๐๐
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๐ I actually have the gang and I signed up for our first family group hike with my hiking group!!! Five miles along a creek woot woot!!! I love it my dear, and you best keep dreaming. It would seem the best dreams are the ones when you awake…and your dreams paint the loveliest pictures โค
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Is with the Irish I hope. Keep me updated. โค
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Reblogged this on A Wandering Butt and commented:
โค Could anything not make you fall more in love with nature? Yazzy is too talented for my silly words to describe โค
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Omg. I am blushing. I don’t deserve this much praise. Thanks to my inspiration!! My dear twin D!!!
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You deserve all the praise I can give you and then some!!!! Your poetry is bliss!
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You are too generous with your praise. ๐๐
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Beautiful Yassy, a painting of Mother Nature herself. Dana is a lucky friend to have something so beautiful dedicated to her by such a beautiful person.
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Thank you J, I don’t what to call you anymore. You got a generous heart ! Too much praise may get to my head but then it’s good cos it may defreeze. Lol
What am I saying
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I don’t know what you’re saying…….looks like someone’s got a little Brain Freeze. ;o) Lol
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You froze my brain , not looking good. A wrestler punched me.
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Good, that means you’ve been watching so you’re almost ready to be tested. But you know wrestlers pull their punches. ;o)
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I can pull some too. Ha!!!!
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Ahh…pretty “cool”. Well, if you can pull that off then you can wrestle with the best of them. You should have no problem with the test.
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You will be responsible for my death, Joker
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;o) I wouldn’t say that…..unless you laughed to death. What a way to go.
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Really. You pushed me into that ring Joker
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I needed a partner Yassy and you were the closes one. Don’t worry, you’re in good hands.
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Ah. Rip Yasmin ๐๐ฐ๐จ๐ฑ
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No, I wouldn’t say that……I said you’re in good hands. ;o)
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Hands of a wrestler
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Naturally.
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Evocative of different times, places, beauty…โค
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Thank you my lovely Saila. How are you girl?
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Fine Yasmin! ๐ love reading your work. I’m so impressed!
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You impress me too.
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Seriously I can never bring beauty into my writing. Not the exquisite kind that you do,with such ease.
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Don’t say that Sailaja. You are way too gifted , I sometimes wish I could write like you. I draw inspiration from all of you here. Thank you Saila. You have a gentle heart.
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You are generous in your appreciation. ๐๐๐๐๐
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Sisters in arms , the two of us. My heart warms !
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Wow!
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Very unique in wording and design. Well done, Yassy!
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Thank you Robbie. Thank you very much.
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I think we all need a drunken bee to fall into our lap’s once in a while.
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Too drunk to sting.
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I think the first person, mixed with the three line reality checks is something else – that, to me was difficult to write in an understandable way, but I hope you got what I was trying to say. You are cleverer than me, I rest my case.
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You way too kind to me.
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I respect your work, Lady Yasmin
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Likewise , Lord Jurg!
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“Forest abuzz with haiku”–Love that phrase!
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I love haiku , try to write !
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Haiku is a wonderful form, rather challenging some days! ๐
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Yes, you are absolutely right!
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An excellent and atmospheric haibun yassy. I am starting to read more about this form and this has tempted me more. I love the last haiku, – a drunken bee fainting into your lap creates such wonderful imagery ๐
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Thank you Davy. I push myself. But that is so fulfilling. Hope you try your hand at this. Will be interested , bye. Take care.
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Thank you yassy. I will be giving it a go ๐
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Yeah. Great. ๐
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The drunken bee…love this
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Thank you Golden!
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Reblogged this on Mick E Talbot Poems and commented:
a haibun full
divulging natures secrets
lush sweet aromas
~~~
blissful silence
no whispers a gentle breeze
weeping willow rocks
~~~
birds of paradise
echoing your beauty
your gift from nature
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my words falter
my concentration blurred
drowned all asunder
~~~
a moments respite
haibun and you haiku
exquisite words
wow wow W O W!!!
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Wow. Wow wow.
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An absolutely Beautiful poem, it was so vivid that I can picture it clearly๐ ๐
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Thank you Sophie.
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Yassy, you hit the gorgeous nail on the head again. Divine!!
Really.
(Not sure how I missed it the first time, I saw it thanks to Mick’s reblog. I’m not sure everything shows up in the reader).
You are inspiring.
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Thank you Venessa.
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My pleasure! Love your talent!
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You are too kind.
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No ๐ You deserve all the praise
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Hi! Thanks for liking my poem Different Constellation. That was a big compliment. I like your poems a lot. Keep writing!
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Thank you ๐, you keep writing too.
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Love your word choice and lyrical phrasing, Yassy!
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Thank you Lyn
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A beautiful haibun series, filled with a wonderful mix of figurative and descriptive language. There is such a peacefulness created as readers are drawn into this world you describe.
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Thank you ๐ wow. Thanks
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You are welcome, Yassy! ๐
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Stunning!
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Thankx man!
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Good night. Be well.
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Very eloquent and beautiful.
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Thank you Kim.
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A much needed uplifting read Jasmine.
Thanks for bringing a little lightness to the day.
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