in the quietness
the evening dewdrops fall
soothing languid leaves
moonbeams pierce the gloaming;
i write a poem for you
#tanka
(4/6/4/6/6)
in the quietness
the evening dewdrops fall
soothing languid leaves
moonbeams pierce the gloaming;
i write a poem for you
#tanka
(4/6/4/6/6)
yaskhan 
You really are a class act Lady Yasmin
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Lol. You are the nicest guy on WP , a true gentleman, blue blooded.
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“I write a poem for you” was the best line, for me. That’s beauty in rawness and simplicity.
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Thank you my sweet girl. Love your comments , makes me high. Dud you write a new po?
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Yes I did. I write everyday, sometimes several times a day 😁
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Read your latest. Little gem 💎 of a po!
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Saw you wonderful comment there. 😘Thank you my dear
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Good night. Sleep well, now that all is well.
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Goodnight to you too. Sweet dreams.
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Dunno when I will sleep 😴 lol
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I agree, also 😊
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Thanks , Tamara.
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This is lovely!
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Thank you Sarah. 😊
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Always.
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:o)
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Very pretty, Yassy!
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Thank you Robbie.
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I love this! Just wonderful.
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Thank you Nic !
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Peace 😎
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🤓
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quietness muted night
broken tawny owls twooing
whispering lovers sigh
lightening flashed shadows blinked
silence returned post thunder
midnight walks alone
moon light shadows lead the way
backlit shade conceals
torchlight reveals her beauty
as I now walk by her side
precious moments flit
spontaneous emotions
flow through cyber space
silent secrets will be read
sleep well precious lady
i read your poem
moon beams highlighting words
excitement now stirs
tis not dew drops falling
tread carefully there my tears
silent evening
scent of moon lit roses
then hark the singing
nightingale giving voice
evening song church bells ringing
stillness winter lull
suns warmth arousing wildlife
their hibernation disturbed
early dusk so chilling
disturbing fickle season
Enjoy, for I swoon over yours ☺
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Sir Mick Talbot. You are one fine poet.
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precious lady
take heed all your accolades
my thanks for mine too
your poetry priceless words
treasure you share with the world
Keep sharing,
Mick
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Absolutely lovely poem as always 👌💕
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Thanks Sophi.
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Your most welcome 💕
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Your quality as a poet continues to shine, even in the darkness of the night yassy 🙂
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Thank you David.
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🙂
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😎
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I know this isn’t for me, but thank you all the same for the sheer pleasure of reading it 😉
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I am glad you enjoyed this. It’s only a poem , silly. So no worries. Say hi to Taarika.
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Yo, for sure, ty
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Yo !
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For who, may I ask? Such lovely lines.❤
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Your imagination is running amock
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😂😘
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❤😘😘😘😘😘😘
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So well-crafted and glides so easily across my mind. Thanks!
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Thank you J
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I thank you more! I need to read great stuff and you deliver!
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I want to write like you
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Many thanks J
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Hi Yasmin, your Haiku thoughts are amazing. Would you like it if we feature your short stories on our Facebook Page – The Scribbled Writings? We will give you credits for each and every piece of work of yours.
This is a link for our Facebook page: http://www.facebook.com/thescribbledwritings
Please let us know if you would like your stories to be featured on them.
Regards,
Karthik Pillai
The Scribbled Writings
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So sweet of you Karthik. Deeply honored and delighted. Sorry, but I just don’t like Facebook. It’s not you , i been asked before too but I can’t just do it. Thank you so much for thinking about me. God bless you. Peace ✌️
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