unspoken syllables
choreograph into
sensations of motion
flow like skein
against mind
discretions
like a gypsy child
in bohemian haze
traversing
amorphous thoughts
I unravel..
unspoken syllables
choreograph into
sensations of motion
flow like skein
against mind
discretions
like a gypsy child
in bohemian haze
traversing
amorphous thoughts
I unravel..
I timed that well, Lady Yasmin. I just checked into WP and there you were writing clever words.
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Oh come on ! Clever no, but where have you been Lord Zoolon?
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I’ve been working Lady Zoolon.
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I thought so too.
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I see I just made you Lady Zoolon when you’re Lady Yasmin. I hope I won’t get sent to The Tower.
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Oh yeah I almost didn’t see it then it made me grin. Faux pas by Lord Zoolon , no, you won’t be sent to The Tower, you already live in a palace.
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I’m still celebrating the Arsenal win against the team ranked 105 places below us in the cup. We only won 2-0, Lady Yasmin
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That is good to hear. I am happy for you Lord Zoolon.
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π π π
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My heart doctor.
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π π π
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This is beautiful, Yasmine. It flows like water and soothes.
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Many thanks for your words of warmth, Dana.
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Always! Your poetry makes me think in wonderful ways.
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Ah. That is so nice to hear.
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You are very talented Yassy. I like the line choreograph into
sensations of motion.
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Many many thanks Robbie. Your appreciation warms this heart.
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I’d name an amusement ride after you Yassy because your writing takes the mind on a rollercoaster ride of wonder where the scenic route is pure beauty just like you.
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Thank you my friend. You are generous with your praise . I respect you for reading my work and feel delighted with your feedback. Thanh you J!
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Anytime Yassy, I love reading your work….it’s truly a delight and I’m glad I found your sight and you. π
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Likewise
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Thank you Yassy
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Welcome ,J
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;o)
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So very beautiful!
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Thank you Iris.
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My pleasure, Yassy. π
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Excellent poem. Beautifully wrapped words in motion. Thanks for sharing.
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Thanks Jo
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You’re welcome.
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π
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More excellent words to unravel the mind yassy π
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Thank you David
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Why the hell isn’t your work showing up in my reader? Grrr. As usual you bend my mind around beautiful words and lovely sentiments.
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Your reader doesn’t read me lol π
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Yeah, I know, it’s annoying and saynotoclowns either.
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In my reader, I have my followed sites , don’t you ?
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Yes, but you’re not there
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This one’s a bit of a puzzle….unravel… it requires a few reads…I like it
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Ok Forrest.
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