From slumber, cries arouse me
The clock shows the hour, so wee
Tonight, the stars give no light
The moon, eclipsed from sight
Secrets, the night’s darkness holds
The day veils, never unfolds
Stillness of silence broken
A cry from the heart, spoken
Echoing in my ears.
Lament filled with sorrow, fears
Nightmare or broken dream
Down my cheeks, trickles a stream
To a whisper, my sobs fade
Like the wind carrying them forbade.
#Rhyme
Beautiful, Yassy, but so sad.
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It’s only a poem !thanks for writing in. 😊🙋🏻
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The seamless flow of the rhyming words bring out the emotional feelings so well!
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Thank you Radha. Thanks 🙏🏼 for reading and appreciating. Have a nice evening.
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Beautiful, sad, enlightening still, as nothing lasts forever…
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Yes Lulia, you are right. Thanh you.
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We are right. Thank-you, too, Yassy.
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Welcome 😀😊Lulia. Have a wonderful week.
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You, too, and beautiful thoughts and happenings 🙂
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Awww so much feels when I read it or maybe because I’m kinda sad too 😦 nevertheless, I love it. 🙂
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Yeah. That is what poetry should do. But you must not be sad dear girl. Cheer up, it can’t be that bad. Smile 😘😊🙋🏻😂
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And you are a great writer! 🙂 Yes, Thanks Yassy! All is well, all is well! 🙂 Hope January has been good to you too. Have a great Feb ahead! 🙂
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Thank you Lotte,you too have a great year ahead. Take care of yourself. Keep in touch. 😘
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I love this, Yas! 🙂
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Oh thank you so much Chi.
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A class act Lady Yasmin, even when writing sad.
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Thank you Lord Zoolon. ? Missing the music !
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And I’ve been missing you and your words, Yasmin
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Hope you are okay Jurg.
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All the better now you’re back.
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You take care Zooly!
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Weaves a mesmerizing spell
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Thank you Christine!
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Your words draw you into the sadness of this poem yassy and the last two lines hit you full on. An excellent piece of poetry.
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Thank you kind Davy.
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Beautifully written Yas.
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Thank you Carter.
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Loved this 👌✨
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Thank you 😊 very much.
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Beautiful
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Thx little.
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You’re welcome friend 😊
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🙋🏻😊
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Do you write from your experience or from others or from imagination?it is exquisite .
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Both !glad you liked it. Thank you
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So very well crafted. From you that is no surprise. Thanks, Yassy.
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Thank you Jewitt.
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Hmmm…whom is available for me so to with you confuse? But I take your thanks in any way you so wish, m’dear!
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Good to have you around. Heartwarming to have good friends. Have a nice weekend Bruce.
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How sweet of you.
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Cried with the words and images. Beautiful poem, Yassy. I like your description under your title and that comes up in Google. I don’t know if you changed it — so, either I still like it, or it just draws me in. Thanks, Yas.
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You are so welcome Rach.
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There is a beautifully strange imagery that this poem gives birth to. It’s mesmerizing due to its rhythmic tone and yet so sad. Brilliant poem.
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Thank you Poorv
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Beautiful piece Jasmine.
I’ve had a few such tears recently. Sigh.
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Why , the tears , may I ask ?
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You don’t want to know.
Just a woman in my life…or more accurately…not in my life.
Good thing I have the Super Bowl tomorrow. 🙂
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Oh ! Broken heart my dear Forrest. Sorry ! Be brave. And enjoy the Super Bowl.
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Cheer up. It’s not so bad.
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If o click on your profile on the like page I don’t get your site.
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Reblogged this on Ned Hamson's Second Line View of the News.
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