Je suis marooned sur cette île
J’aime vraiment la situation dans laquelle je suis et l’aimer
Je ne l’échangerais pour rien
Vivre sur l’amour et l’air frais
Avec seulement vous en tête
Pas de faim me frappe
Tu me manques
lis-moi
S’il vous plaît.
Un poème nonet
message in a bottle
I am marooned on this island
I truly love the situation I am in and loving it
I would not trade it for anything
Living on love and fresh air
With only you in mind
No hunger strikes me
I miss you
Read me
Please.
A Nonet
Really beautiful.
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Thank you 😊 Nico. Thank
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I liked this!
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Thank you.
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Love this! French is so elegant, it feels as smooth as a fine silk tie.
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Thank you very much Brian.
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You’re welcome, also, come see my new post.
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Oh yeah !!
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Bonne poésie la demoiselle Yasmin
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Merci Lord Zoolon.
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Love it 👏👌😊
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Thank you 😊😘
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Well constructed. I enjoyed this.
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Thanks.
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je ne spa avouc…but that was cool siiiiiiiiiista!
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Thanks bro.
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I’ m from Compton woman, no switch in the dithch, you feeling me
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🙄
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Sounds beautiful in French. It’s interesting how the French requires a lot more words. The English Nonet poetry form benefits from the one word “Please”. The formal “If you please” of French adds extra syllables. But anyway, forms are to be broken when necessary.
I like the inherent contradiction of living on love in the mind, but missing someone. It adds surprise to the mood of the poem.
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Thanks Doug.
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J’apprends le français. Je pensait que ta poème était excellente.
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Merci cher poète!
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J’aime cette poste. Ou le post. Well, you know, … Like. And Like for your other posts. I am enjoying your stuff.
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Merci. Au revoir
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Loved this. Great flow and emotion.
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Thank you K J.
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