time hangs in balance–
slowing down, almost crawling
as I walk the rope
doing a “freehand”–
juggling clubs, spinning plates
pushing wheelbarrows
mentally focussed–
my spirit endures the force
of gravitation
equilibrating–
psychological makeup
of the mind and soul
an act perilous–
performed with effortless poise
the ultimate feat
hanging by a thread–
walking a thin line between
intellect and heart.
Beautifully written, deep, and stimulating as we walk that “thin line between intellect and heart.”
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Thank you Noble.
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Brilliant poem, Yassy!
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Thank you Robbieπ
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Perfect poem
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Thank you Missy.
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Ah, I feel this Yassy. Beautiful, eloquent and familiar.
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Life is familiar. Lol
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Love this poem. The head knows but the heart wants…
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Thank you π
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Wow! Yasmine, this is gorgeous writing. I LOVE it.
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Thank you Robbie.
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You are so welcome Yaz, this was a fantastic poem.
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I’m running I’m running, catch up with me life!!??
This is perhaps one of your best pieces as far as personification and figurative language go.
Time hanging by a balance and crawling while you seemingly racing with so many acts together is a very evocative imagery. You have managed to portray the dilemma perfectly walking ‘the thin line between intellect and heart’, something that all of us walk invariably but are too caught up or caught down to give a thought to, let alone document it. But by slowing down time and making it hang by a thread, you have coaxed it to take a moment to think about the discord it creates when it moves without sync with your actions and intentions and wishes.
A very fine work, soul sis! π
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Thank you ππ
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You are welcome. I could have gone on but I thought I’d be boring you to death with my non-stop blah blahπ. But I’ll repeat, exquisite Senryu series both in terms of language and thought that went into perfecting it.
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If we met each other I doubt both of us would let any of us get a word in sideways. We are so alike in that is that we talk and talk and talk and that’s what sisters do. Did any of the above make sense.
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Perfect sense!
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I have already met you, that’s how I feel. In spirit and that telepathic moment when like minds speak.
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True. Maybe that’s also why we understand each other’s poetry too so well
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Thank goodness you are around.
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Always! π
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I really love this Poem! Great job!
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Thank you kindly ππ»
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The whole poem and the ending poem brought everything together.
Creating the ultimate poetic beauty.
What inspired this amazing work? I’m curious.
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I think more than anything , people inspire me, the lives they lead. I think everyone around me is poetry in motion , sometimes I Am able to put them in verse.
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Creative inspiration in everyone. Nice!
People inspire everything with the power of words and vision. That is the key opening all doors. π
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You got that Charles. Thanks.
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You welcome Yassy. π
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Wonderful!! π π
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Thanks Chi π
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A portrait of being. Loved it.
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Thank you Jurg!!
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A very thought provoking poem yassy. It is the classic power battle between the brain and heart. Will there ever be a winner?
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We just have to be happy I guess Davy.
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It certainly helps yassy π
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Yes .
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Heh-heh-heh-heh-heh!!!
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Beautiful and inspirational, I love it!
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Thank you Lyssa
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