I set off on one of my dreams
Under sunlight’s pale golden beams
Meandering tawny meadows
Looking for harvest gold rainbows
Reflections in gurgling brooks, streams.
Trees preparing to bare their soul
Cascading leaves russet, brown fold
To lay down a carpet of gold
A nip in the air warmness stole
Nature hibernates as I stroll.
#quintella
an old favourite of mine..
Beautiful… what a lovely painting! Great poem. π
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Many thanks Iris.
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It’s a pleasure, Yassy!
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Very visual, Yassy. Tweeted it @bakeandwrite. Have a happy day!
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Thank you RobbiesI
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Brooks gurgling… I love it!!
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Thank you MultiD.
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You are very welcome, Yassy!
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Yassy does tend to strew such visuals about the place, delightfully so, no?
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Oh ! You reading my old stuff. Your a good friend to have !
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Such a beautiful imagery painted by your words Yasminπ
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Thank you Radha.
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Oh man! This is delicious. Will come back again to leave more words.
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She could open an all-hours diner with blazing windows scrolling her latest and have to shoo in the long lines halted to see what’s next just to see her menu(s). One wonders: is menu one of those “ii” plurals? Bet Yassy knows.
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You betcha! π€
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Good one π
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Thanks
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I want to have dreams like this yassy. Your great words create a very vivid image.
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Poets are dreamers Davy. I guess that is our sanity. Thank you for reading.
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Alright, here I am reading this a second time.
The imagery you create here through your words is powerful it takes the reader to a different world. This is sooo His kinda Poetry β€. But I love it too.
And the line about trees baring their souls is truly wonderful.
Wonderful job, Yassy!
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Thank you sweetie , praise from the high priestess of poetry is awesome. Oh my. Happy you liked it.
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High priestess!! Now that’s very high praise, don’t know if I’m worth it. But your kindness is remarkable, my dear friend.
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Worth is measured poetically btw
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I love this emoji.π
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Absolute gorgeousness I love it!
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Thank you π
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You’re so welcome Yasmine!
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Beautiful!
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Thank you
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Thank you kindness.
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Adjectives – I have run out of them. Your poem is simply beautiful!
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Thank you Nancy.
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You’re most welcome!
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Very evocative, you’ve painted a portrait with your words!
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Thank you Kunal.
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Not sure if ever I will be unsurprised by your eye-pen heart-mind abilities. You capture so much. ‘Scuse, please: I need a third read – you do that to lots of us, I am sure.
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Your a sweet guy my good friend , Brucey.
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Reblogged this on richwrapper and commented:
Yassy – go see for yourself – offers one of her favorite forms, A Quintella, whose rhyme scheme and rhythm almost remains hidden for the imagery she paints between those wondrous lines. Find her at Yaskhan . What’s more her work is littered with surprises and delights – and education.
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I am swooning with delight. Thank you π thank you π
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Gosh, girl! My emojii – is a plural, no? – runneth over. The delight is mine!
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Amazing πΉ
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Thank you π
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