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red sun

I watch with bated breath as,
the sun beams aurum flashlight,
on the blindfolded night sky,
deep carmine bathes earth…

23 thoughts on “red sun”

  1. You do these so skillfully.
    Loved every word, the way you have described a daily occurence and breathed life into it, proving once again that as mundane as it seems, the sun coming coming out everyday, day after day, is a miracle and a story in itself.
    Beautifully done, Yasmin! Pat yourself good

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  6. Again, as previously noted your use and choice of colors provides a vivid image.
    It makes the poem come alive.

    Good first read on a Monday morning. Thank you.

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