red sun

I watch with bated breath as,
the sun beams aurum flashlight,
on the blindfolded night sky,
deep carmine bathes earth…

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23 thoughts on “red sun

  1. You do these so skillfully.
    Loved every word, the way you have described a daily occurence and breathed life into it, proving once again that as mundane as it seems, the sun coming coming out everyday, day after day, is a miracle and a story in itself.
    Beautifully done, Yasmin! Pat yourself good

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  2. Again, as previously noted your use and choice of colors provides a vivid image.
    It makes the poem come alive.

    Good first read on a Monday morning. Thank you.

    Liked by 1 person

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