silvered dew sparkles
embellishing the expanse
an argent gliding
of luminous corundums
dazzle in nature’s mural
bejewelled, sequined
icicles fluoresce chasteness,
a Puffin breaks ice
as the fragrance of Snowdrops
envelopes silken snowflakes
#tanka
yaskhan 
“an argent gliding
of luminous corundums
dazzle in nature’s mural
bejewelled, sequined
icicles fluoresce chasteness”
WOW!
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Thank you Kunal .
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I’m still there, reading it again 🙂
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Kind of you.
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Hey, did it come from a snowflake*, because it’s exquisitely penned?
*Here’s the context –
https://randomrantsruminationsramblings.wordpress.com/2016/12/16/every-thought-a-snowflake/
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I was inspired a week back after I saw a video that a dear friend sent me.
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Will check your link
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No hurry, I’m sure you will. Just sent it coz it was a recent post on ‘snow’… TC!
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Of course Kunal. Thank you.
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No one else paints pictures with words like you do Yasmin. So good.
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Thank you Jorg. That is a comment from a beautiful mind.
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An Arsenal victory mind!
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Oh yeah ! Kudos
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If they – or when they – lose, I lose all creativity.
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Losing is also another form of winning Jorg. They come back stronger. You shouldn’t take it to heart.
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You are right Yasmin. Football is the one thing that can make or ruin a day. A stupid thing that I allow it to be that way when with everything else in life I’m just me.
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Wow, this is really fantastic language Yasmine. Such imagery as well. Lovely!
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Thanks for the inspiration Robbie.
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As always my dear Yasmine
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Lovely one, yassy
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Thanks a ton Robbie.
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Gorgeous imagery
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Thank you Maria.
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Truly gorgeous Yassy– both the words themselves and the imagery you evoke.
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Many thanks for reading Christine.
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Beautifully expressed!
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Thanks Akansha!
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Thank you Rich ness of heart Bruce J
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I begin to see that what I began to ask myself: “can Yasmin shoehorn so deftly, softly and with no possibility of blister yet one more image, one more frozen motion into five simple lines done twice,?” better possibly had I asked of my self still swirling in your words, why are you still seated and not bifurcatedly rolling on the floor – and the ceiling – in marvel and joy? I am so glad I stopped to watch your puffin! My ears hurt – not just my cheeks from the gifted grin you give.
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Bruce.
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Incredible, incredible, incredible… to infinity.
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Just remembered you Rachel. That is unbelievable.
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❤ 🙂
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Exceptional images throughout your work.
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Thanks Pasky.
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