a hokku

I sit alone

watching the waves crash….

a yacht sails

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9 thoughts on “a hokku

  1. I tried looking for a ‘kigo’ in your hokku thinking maybe you have metaphorised it extensively. Nice work though, with the milieu and the poet’s thought process captured rather well.

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