Many many many thanks Saila. I wrote it just the way I saw it. The image stays in my mind and I can’t help thinking about it and then I have to tell people like you who understand . Thank you Sailaja. ππ
it’s not crutches. it’s just boots for protection. no need to hurry. getting there in due time. enjoying the walk in the dark on the gravel path. i knew the stones made noise but didn’t think it could be heard that far away.
Just your 15 words paint a whole cavass
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Thank you George.
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Powerful…
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Thankx.
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Wow! So sharp, so poignant and in such few words! Excellent!
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Many thanks for the appreciation Noble.
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You are certainly most welcome! π
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Four lines and a world of meaning. Yasmin! You are amazing! β€β€β€β€β€
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Many many many thanks Saila. I wrote it just the way I saw it. The image stays in my mind and I can’t help thinking about it and then I have to tell people like you who understand . Thank you Sailaja. ππ
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You are welcome Yassy! πππππ
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Sending hugs from Mumbai
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Kisses from Bangalore! ππππππ
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Love that place. I grew up there. Went to Mary immaculate high school lived in Wilson garden
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You must visit again!
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Am dying to.
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My Revathi.
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Awwwwwww! π
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Come to Mumbai .
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Sure thing! Would love to.
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Wow, I feel as though I’ve just watched like the trailer to a spooky movie. Very evocative. π
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Thank you for reading and appreciating
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it’s not crutches. it’s just boots for protection. no need to hurry. getting there in due time. enjoying the walk in the dark on the gravel path. i knew the stones made noise but didn’t think it could be heard that far away.
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