a broken dream
frozen in time
beyond the realm
of subconscious thought
illusions
deluded
by introspections
of beguiling optimism
a broken dream
frozen in time
beyond the realm
of subconscious thought
illusions
deluded
by introspections
of beguiling optimism
yaskhan 
Wonderful
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You have a treasure trove of poems. I will have to come back and revisit. Could not find your home/about page.
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Oh why can’t you ?
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I did not see about/home when I visited your blogsite.
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It has to be , will check it out.
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Really excellent.
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Thank you Nico
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Reblogged this on wwwpalfitness.
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Thank you Paul.
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You’re welcome
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So well written. I particularly like “beguiling optimism.”
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Thank you Scifi
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Why the sadness?
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We poets are a sad lot.
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🙂
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Cya Choppy.
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I hardly get to see you. You’re elusive.
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Nope. I am not. Am right here. Seeee
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Haha….yes as iffff. 🙂
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We are all omnipotent , you , me n all at WordPress
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Um, well I’m yet to experience that.
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Dream away Bardy. You are a poet so let your imagination get the better of you.
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Haha….I want to. But reality always pulls me back. What tragedy.
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Catch you later.
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Beautiful. I love the last line. beguiling optimism – the ability to heal (my interpretation)
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Oh yeah. Thank you so much Nancy J
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You’re welcome!
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they do stay with us a long time, those broken dreams.
well said.
thanks for reading and liking my poem.
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Thank you much much and oh you are so welcome
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Love this poem so much! I could read it over and over again.
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Thank you Lang.
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“introspections
of beguiling optimism”
Awesome words right there!
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Thank you Rob.
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Wonderful mam I am new here would you please review my blog so that I can improve and develop my skill
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Yup Champ.
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Well thank you mam
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You are most welcome Champ
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Mam the pleasure was totally mine
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