love intoxicates
fills up the heart with passion
soulful temptation
irresistible longing
all sense of rhyme, reason lost.



3 thoughts on “captivated

  1. I must learn what a tanka is. Iv’e seen it mentioned so many times. I think it’s like a haiku but a couple more 7 syllable lines?
    So 5-7-5-7-7

    I entered a haiku contest and I was pleased with my entry. I was super excited. I didnt come anywhere. And I swear they had about a thousand runners up too! Not me though! It must have really STUNK. (or it was SO good they were jealous. Yes I think that’s definitely what happened))

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