I
write to
lighten my
burdened spirit
thrown open are floodgates of my bruised heart
tears blot my vision,take shape on paper
emotions flow
from my pen
giving
peace
I
write to
lighten my
burdened spirit
thrown open are floodgates of my bruised heart
tears blot my vision,take shape on paper
emotions flow
from my pen
giving
peace
yaskhan 
Poetry is such an amazing way to express ones self. Also, to release pain. This poem speaks to me and I’m sure to many a poet or artist out there.
Cheers! ^_^
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Thank you soul
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Poetry gives dignity to life and people. It is an elixir of life.
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You are so right Anne
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Beautiful
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Thank you Liza !💃
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Hi. This is Randy. Nice poem, and I know the sentiment.
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Hello Randy. Thank you for being so generous with your appreciation
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You write wonderfully. I’ll look forward to reading more of your blog.
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I can so fuckin relate
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That is really good…well done
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Thank you .
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Once it is written …..the feeling is Ah ! Feels good man 👌
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Wonderfully put. Well done!
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Aw. Thank you kindly
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I really like your poem! Simple, yet powerful.
I’d really appreciate if you looked at my short poem as well and let me know what you think. https://reviewinglife365.wordpress.com/2016/10/07/first-heartbreak/
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It’s great. Will be reading more .
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this is deep
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This is lovely. I felt like you were writing what I feel inside. Thank you! 🙂
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You are welcome U, what’s your name ?
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My name is Huda. It’s nice to meet you (virtually) 🙂 Hope to keep a dialogue with you open as I’m so inspired by you. Any blog advice you can offer is much appreciated!
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Huda, what a beautiful name . I am so very pleased to meet you Huda.
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Nice post. Good writings.
I am well -coming all readers of this blog to check out my last tow poetry at http://untoldview.wordpress.com/ happy reading. Hope you all like it.
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Sure
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I do too
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😀🙋🏻
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This is so nice! Has inspired me to write something sort of similar, about poetry being an outlet for the soul, and for pent up emotion.. Thanks for sharing!
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You are welcome Alex.
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Beautifully written…..You sure have inspired me.. 🙂
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Thank you Anje
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https://heartbreakpoetrry.wordpress.com/2016/09/24/my-dying-rose/
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Can’t open link. Will go to your blog
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You penned it well! Amazing!💙
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Thanks
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Lovely post, 🌹
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I’m so glad I came across this. Poetry is in itself it’s own kind of music. A language that reaches across continents and oceans. It’s a really beautiful thing to create and be a part of.
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Your blog is amazing!
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Thank you Archita, you are kind and generous in your appreciation.
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You’re welcome. Do check out my blogs if you have the time 😀
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Yup. Will foll
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Can’t follow.
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Why not?
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It’s showing the site us not there
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is it working now?
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Went to my mail n got you
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I opened my mail and went to your post n foll. Glitch galore on wp. Am havin the same prob
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Here are my links:
ivyonthetrellis.wordpress.com
architamittra.wordpress.com
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Thanks.
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It was beautiful💕💕
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Thanks
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Beautiful crafted my friend, I know exactly how you feel
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Thank you
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Writing is so therapeutic! It’s exactly what I do. Check some of mine out on my page 🙂
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Thank you. Will do.
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I love this so much, relate immensely! I just started if some of you could check out my posts, I’d appreciate it. Feedback would be great
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Yeah sure
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Send me your link.
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Obscenethoughts.wordpress.com
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Your link shows no posts
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Amazing. Your kind of thinking relates to mine..check my work. Love yours
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Thank you. I will check your work.
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I love this.
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Thank you Sleepy.
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When I see a poet, I see a kinsman!
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We are kindred spirits
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